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[title] => Cheer!
[time] => 2019-05-20 00:12:14
[hometext] => Make a mighty noise, that you not be forgotten!
[bodytext] => Celebrate your history.
Mark well and loud your victories.
Too swift we mortals fade to night
Across the centuries candlelight
To feed eternitys delight.
If we each cast a tiny light;
Til darkness yielded to our sight
How would evils coin be spent;
Where love alone could pay the rent?
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Cheer!
Contributed by
softerware
on
Monday, 20th May 2019 @ 12:12:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Celebrate your history.
Mark well and loud your victories.
Too swift we mortals fade to night
Across the centuries candlelight
To feed eternitys delight.
If we each cast a tiny light;
Til darkness yielded to our sight
How would evils coin be spent;
Where love alone could pay the rent?
Copyright ©
softerware
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2019-05-20 00:12:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Cheer!
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 20th May 2019 @ 01:24:40 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful writing.
Too bad human eyes do not glow.
Very unique piece! |
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Re: Cheer!
(User Rating: 1 ) by SPOKENWORDARTIST on
Monday, 20th May 2019 @ 05:53:40 PM AEST (User
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So very true beautifully written. |
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Re: Cheer!
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 22nd May 2019 @ 12:10:23 PM AEST (User
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Another piece to waken a weary mind. Each of us
have a unique story to tell yet we tend to keep it
to ourselves.
If we each share our tiny light then as whole...
where would shadows have to hide?
"HOW WOULD EVIL*S COIN BE SPENT;"
"Money being the root of all evil" ancient truth
brilliantly rewritten.
another great poem
Rich |
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Re: Cheer!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jigget on
Thursday, 23rd May 2019 @ 12:50:09 AM AEST (User
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Perfect poems come eaay to you. Super sugar bonus gravy points for the perfect ending.
Excellent write.
Thank you for your comments on mine. |
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