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[aid] => mick
[title] => You Bring Me Down
[time] => 2019-05-15 12:41:08
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[bodytext] => You bring me down when you`re around
Give me pause without cause
Make me feel small when I`m tall
When you walk downtown
No one dares to be around
You can make even a lonely clown frown
Make noise from no sound
Loneliness turns to happiness
When you`re not around
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[topic] => 75
[informant] => jamesstockdale
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You Bring Me Down
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 12:41:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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You bring me down when you`re around
Give me pause without cause
Make me feel small when I`m tall
When you walk downtown
No one dares to be around
You can make even a lonely clown frown
Make noise from no sound
Loneliness turns to happiness
When you`re not around
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jamesstockdale
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Re: You Bring Me Down
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 04:19:31 PM AEST (User
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You poem reminds me of a saying that goes SOME PEOPLE BRIGHTEN A ROOM WHEN THEY ENTER IT; SOME WHEN THEY LEAVE.
Sounds like your referring to the later, and true to your writing style, we all know someone like that.
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Re: You Bring Me Down
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Wednesday, 15th May 2019 @ 07:57:11 PM AEST (User
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"Make noise from no sound". What a brilliant line.
I dont know if this a memory or current, but if now, maybe a change is in order.
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Re: You Bring Me Down
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 18th May 2019 @ 07:15:35 PM AEST (User
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some people have that affect on us
keep your distance
if you can... |
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Re: You Bring Me Down
(User Rating: 1 ) by thelaststraw on
Wednesday, 22nd May 2019 @ 05:07:28 PM AEST (User
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Interesting piece like how you express your feelings.
By the way you thought you were my senior you are if your over 70. LoL Nice write |
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Re: You Bring Me Down
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2020 @ 05:18:33 AM AEST (User
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// Duh-am, that person sounds like a bundle of joy. Tell us how you really feel, Jimmy.
Definitely dripping with scathing sarcasm. Too Cool.
Thanks,
Dugan |
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