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[aid] => mick
[title] => Just Console Me
[time] => 2019-04-07 15:00:31
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[bodytext] => You`re the object of my desire
My heart is on fire
Uncomfortable as I am
I need your compassion
As self-absorbed as you are
You sit in the sun and count the rays
If I wanted your arrogance
I`d smile with a quick glance
If I wanted violence
I`d note your lack of romance
Why can`t you just console me
Why do you find it so hard to care
When it comes to my feelings, you`re so unaware
Why can`t you just console me
In the mirror when I see your reflection
To me it spells rejection
The truth between us goes unspoken
I guess I`m just another one of your tokens
Why is it so hard for you to care
Do you enjoy seeing me broken
Why can`t you just console me
When you sit in your easy chair
I find it hard not to stare
If I didn`t love you
How would you even know
I`m a bundle of nerves
With only you to serve
Why can`t you just console me
Why do you find it so hard to care
And now that I am broken
Why can`t you just console me
Why do you find it so hard to care
When it comes to my feelings you`re so unaware
Why can`t you just console me
……………………………………………………………………………………………………...
My spin on "Just Hold Me" by Songwriters: MARIA MENA, ARVID WAM SOLVANG
© EMI Music Publishing,Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC
My favorite version:
Hulan.B - "Just Hold Me" - Blind Audition - The Voice of Mongolia 2018
[comments] => 3
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[topic] => 34
[informant] => jamesstockdale
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Just Console Me
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Sunday, 7th April 2019 @ 03:00:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SongLyrics
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You`re the object of my desire
My heart is on fire
Uncomfortable as I am
I need your compassion
As self-absorbed as you are
You sit in the sun and count the rays
If I wanted your arrogance
I`d smile with a quick glance
If I wanted violence
I`d note your lack of romance
Why can`t you just console me
Why do you find it so hard to care
When it comes to my feelings, you`re so unaware
Why can`t you just console me
In the mirror when I see your reflection
To me it spells rejection
The truth between us goes unspoken
I guess I`m just another one of your tokens
Why is it so hard for you to care
Do you enjoy seeing me broken
Why can`t you just console me
When you sit in your easy chair
I find it hard not to stare
If I didn`t love you
How would you even know
I`m a bundle of nerves
With only you to serve
Why can`t you just console me
Why do you find it so hard to care
And now that I am broken
Why can`t you just console me
Why do you find it so hard to care
When it comes to my feelings you`re so unaware
Why can`t you just console me
……………………………………………………………………………………………………...
My spin on "Just Hold Me" by Songwriters: MARIA MENA, ARVID WAM SOLVANG
© EMI Music Publishing,Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC
My favorite version:
Hulan.B - "Just Hold Me" - Blind Audition - The Voice of Mongolia 2018
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jamesstockdale
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2019-04-07 15:00:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Just Console Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Sunday, 7th April 2019 @ 03:23:50 PM AEST (User
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Relating to the music! You have personalized the sparse lyrics and spoken of your hearts wish. Your poem is a lovely mirror of the song.
Music makes us all remember.
My favorite line is IF I DIDN/'/T LOVE YOU, HOW WOULD YOU EVEN KNOW. That says it all.
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Re: Just Console Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th April 2019 @ 04:32:50 AM AEST (User
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Perfection, Mr. Jimmy. I bow to your superior talent. |
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Re: Just Console Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Tuesday, 15th February 2022 @ 12:37:20 AM AEST (User
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This seems like a poem written to yourself. I/'/m not sure though. It was very good, it reminds me of some of the mean stuff I say to myself sometimes. This is a very thought provoking write |
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