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[title] => Everyday Hero
[time] => 2019-04-06 19:50:31
[hometext] => Love can make a dove a hawk.
[bodytext] => Crisis. Danger. Mom in action!
Drive Car. ER. Gut reaction.
Paramedics. By the score.
Mission Done. Mom hit the floor.
Action Hero Category.
When it mattered. End of Story.
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Everyday Hero
Contributed by
softerware
on
Saturday, 6th April 2019 @ 07:50:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Crisis. Danger. Mom in action!
Drive Car. ER. Gut reaction.
Paramedics. By the score.
Mission Done. Mom hit the floor.
Action Hero Category.
When it mattered. End of Story.
Copyright ©
softerware
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2019-04-06 19:50:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Everyday Hero
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 7th April 2019 @ 12:34:45 AM AEST (User
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So true. I can read many things into this one.
Very interesting. I wonder if you set it up this way?
Maybe it/'/s me? Got me thinking.... |
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Re: Everyday Hero
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th April 2019 @ 08:47:45 AM AEST (User
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selfless hero
whom ever the are
at the right place in the
right time did all they could
and then, wondered
why they were where they
were, as though it was almost
by accident.
they felt as though it
was an accident,
that they happened by
and perhaps they were lucky
enough to be qualified in someway
to help.
the hawk has good eyesight
And it knows its home.
but the hawk is also
filled with solitude actually
preferring to keep to itself.
Peace!
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Re: Everyday Hero
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th April 2019 @ 04:24:34 AM AEST (User
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Goodness gracious Queen Softy! So much wrapped up in to so very few words. Drama, action, life, death love, sadness. Impressive to say the least. Just wow.
Thankies. |
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Re: Everyday Hero
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 9th April 2019 @ 03:12:20 PM AEST (User
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Apart from the endless duties of a mother..this can
apply to others as well. It think that its the way that
you composed this piece that makes the reader
go at a fast pace. Gut reactions is the prime
definitions of being a parent. There is no instruction
manual. This flowed so nicely.
Brilliant as always.
Rich |
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Re: Everyday Hero
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Tuesday, 9th April 2019 @ 06:59:20 PM AEST (User
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Oh how we take/took our mothers for granted. She taught me many things, but stopped short at /'/multi-tasking./'/ I think she was trying to tell me something by missing it out(?). God bless her - God bless all mothers.
Succinctly written, SW. Well done! |
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