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[aid] => mick
[title] => Girl with a Plan
[time] => 2019-04-06 04:51:18
[hometext] => Written for a friend, who wont let love in.
[bodytext] => The face in her locket
That picked her hearts pocket
Still keeps her from being deceived.
She knows what she knows
And whenever love shows
Her back doors the last thing they see.
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Girl with a Plan
Contributed by
softerware
on
Saturday, 6th April 2019 @ 04:51:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
limericks
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The face in her locket
That picked her hearts pocket
Still keeps her from being deceived.
She knows what she knows
And whenever love shows
Her back doors the last thing they see.
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softerware
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2019-04-06 04:51:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Girl with a Plan
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 6th April 2019 @ 09:35:11 AM AEST (User
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Love is worth more than all the gold in the world, yet so many people go without it.
Spread the message, spread the love!!
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Re: Girl with a Plan
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Saturday, 6th April 2019 @ 01:38:37 PM AEST (User
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It/'/s very compelling - that desire to avoid past aches and tortures.
And if you have a reminder of that? well, then it/'/s a distinct
possibility you may never move past it. Be kind to your friend. ♥
When someone has been burned and/or scathed, the support
and love they //receive// can make all the difference in the world.
When they are ready, they will know it.
Nicely written. Straight to the point.
~ Breezy
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Re: Girl with a Plan
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th April 2019 @ 04:19:17 AM AEST (User
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Good for her. Keep those liars and deceivers away! 👍
As always, great to see a post from our very own Queen Softy! Love it even though love stinks. |
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Re: Girl with a Plan
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 9th April 2019 @ 02:48:43 PM AEST (User
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I just take one day to scar you for the rest of your
life. But as Breezy said...Having something that
constantly reminds you of something that caused
great pain will most often keep you from being able to
move past it. Continue to stand by her and love her
and she will take those steps when she is ready to.
Another great piece.
Rich |
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