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[aid] => mick
[title] => A lovers destiny
[time] => 2019-03-24 07:24:49
[hometext] => You can be loved too well...
[bodytext] => Just we two my love agreed. Yet kept another secretly.
The scent of murder found the air; absent of one lady fair.
Beneath the lake, who shall not wake;
Another place beside her waits
That none need mourn for her embrace.
[comments] => 5
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A lovers destiny
Contributed by
softerware
on
Sunday, 24th March 2019 @ 07:24:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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Just we two my love agreed. Yet kept another secretly.
The scent of murder found the air; absent of one lady fair.
Beneath the lake, who shall not wake;
Another place beside her waits
That none need mourn for her embrace.
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softerware
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2019-03-24 07:24:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A lovers destiny
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 24th March 2019 @ 10:54:29 PM AEST (User
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The more the merrier eh Jaye? Except in marriage that is 😇🤪👍
Well done my friend
Roses
Rakwe |
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Re: A lovers destiny
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th March 2019 @ 07:27:25 AM AEST (User
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The scent of murder, huh? Sounds scary. Remind me to never cross her.
I`m consistently amazed how you just keep writing great poems.
Thank you for being you.
Sir Timotheus |
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Re: A lovers destiny
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 26th March 2019 @ 03:21:06 PM AEST (User
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Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.
That is what I take away from your piece.
Apparently revenge is best served cold and the
woman that is dead cant get any colder.
ANOTHER PLACE BESIDE HER WAITS
a place for the cheating husband?
Amazing piece as always
Rich |
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Re: A lovers destiny
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 27th March 2019 @ 03:28:56 AM AEST (User
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truly enjoy your writiing |
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Re: A lovers destiny
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jecks on
Monday, 1st April 2019 @ 02:57:44 PM AEST (User
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I love the style in which you wrote this. The piece has a wonderful harmony to it! |
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