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[title] => Phonetic Sigh
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[bodytext] => With gentle blush, you tell me hush
Your finger to my lips.
Nose to nose, eyes start to close
Within, my heartbeat skips.
I want to cry, no alibi
For words trapped deep inside.
Yet now they brush with softened touch
Dissolving all my pride.
No thoughts to speak, they leave us weak
It is here amidst this kiss.
For as we share, so do we dare
To finally live our wish.
PKS
3/8/19
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Phonetic Sigh
Contributed by
Jecks
on
Monday, 4th March 2019 @ 05:59:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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With gentle blush, you tell me hush
Your finger to my lips.
Nose to nose, eyes start to close
Within, my heartbeat skips.
I want to cry, no alibi
For words trapped deep inside.
Yet now they brush with softened touch
Dissolving all my pride.
No thoughts to speak, they leave us weak
It is here amidst this kiss.
For as we share, so do we dare
To finally live our wish.
PKS
3/8/19
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Jecks
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Re: Phonetic Sigh
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 4th March 2019 @ 06:09:18 PM AEST (User
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Welcome to YPDC.
This was very nice indeed. I saw myself in your words as I read them and that takes talent. I really like this. Splendid poem! |
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Re: Phonetic Sigh
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 4th March 2019 @ 07:01:38 PM AEST (User
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Hello my old friend. The romantic bliss here is only made more delectable by your superb flow and rhyme. Extremely impressive writing!!
VERY well done
Oh barkeep!!
Raker |
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Re: Phonetic Sigh
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th March 2019 @ 11:08:24 PM AEST (User
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Perfection, Sir Jecks! Perfection indeed.
Welcome back and you posted a very impressive expression to end the hiatus.
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Re: Phonetic Sigh
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 5th March 2019 @ 03:42:05 PM AEST (User
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Splendid piece.
You have described the true definition of love.
For those that have been in love with one person for
many years it isnt merely saying the words but putting
them into action and tending to the fire and keeping
it burning over time. This is love/'/s true testament.
again great writing and I look forward to reading more
of your work :)
Rich |
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Re: Phonetic Sigh
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Wednesday, 6th March 2019 @ 12:09:37 AM AEST (User
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This is so visual its like watching a love scene. I felt as if I shouldn/'/t be reading it!
Lovely and tenderly rendered. My favorite line is DISSOLVING ALL MY PRIDE.
Love has no pride--it melts us.
and you have said it so well. Ah, sweet memories you have served us to relive a precious moment.
A sweet read.
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Re: Phonetic Sigh
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 7th March 2019 @ 08:10:18 PM AEST (User
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yes yes yes
sweet sweet love.... |
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Re: Phonetic Sigh
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Sunday, 31st March 2019 @ 01:13:09 PM AEST (User
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So nice to see you back here, Jecks. :)
and what a write to start with. As always, this is filled with dripping emotion
that fills a body to the brim. As I read this, I almost felt like a peeping Tom,
stealing in the shadows, watching a beautifully enthralling moment unfold.
Well done, my friend. Missed your writes (and your presence) immensely.
~Breezy
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