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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Supergirl
[time] => 2019-02-19 21:01:47
[hometext] => For J, in honor of our complicated friendship
[bodytext] => Kara:
I never tire of flying these streets
The sky above embraces me
The rushing wind propels me
Into a world to others completely unknown
It doesn’t get much better than this
Wayne:
There she goes soaring above the skyline
A stunning comet, a majestic eagle
Touching down every so often to chat
To take a glimpse into my awestruck heart
What I would give for a permanent landing!
Kara:
I spot him from the corner of my eye
Watching with a forlorn gaze
How my heart aches for his
Plagued by unrequited love
You’ll never be happy with a mere human
So they tell me...
Wayne:
And so I wait for the day
The day she grows tired enough to remain grounded
Yet her endurance and strength are what I admire most
So...
Keep flying the streets of Metropolis
And if you ever feel like coming back down to Earth
Your greatest human fan will welcome you
With open arms
Till next time, Supergirl
[comments] => 5
[counter] => 175
[topic] => 55
[informant] => Deidra_Carmichael
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Supergirl
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Tuesday, 19th February 2019 @ 09:01:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Kara:
I never tire of flying these streets
The sky above embraces me
The rushing wind propels me
Into a world to others completely unknown
It doesn’t get much better than this
Wayne:
There she goes soaring above the skyline
A stunning comet, a majestic eagle
Touching down every so often to chat
To take a glimpse into my awestruck heart
What I would give for a permanent landing!
Kara:
I spot him from the corner of my eye
Watching with a forlorn gaze
How my heart aches for his
Plagued by unrequited love
You’ll never be happy with a mere human
So they tell me...
Wayne:
And so I wait for the day
The day she grows tired enough to remain grounded
Yet her endurance and strength are what I admire most
So...
Keep flying the streets of Metropolis
And if you ever feel like coming back down to Earth
Your greatest human fan will welcome you
With open arms
Till next time, Supergirl
Copyright ©
Deidra_Carmichael
... [
2019-02-19 21:01:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Supergirl
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 20th February 2019 @ 10:44:27 PM AEST (User
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Great!!! It took me a few reads to grasp it all.
My fault of course. The ending says it all. |
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Re: Supergirl
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 21st February 2019 @ 12:11:07 PM AEST (User
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Interesting piece. I agree with James.
I had to read it a couple of times. I think I am going
to have to watch the show this weekend :)
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Re: Supergirl
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Friday, 22nd February 2019 @ 05:13:46 PM AEST (User
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Very nice Deidra. I/'/m quite pleased to see you posting again. Poets aren/'/t machines....sometimes a break is needed. I know it to be so.
Like the poem a lot. "Wind rushing propels me"
I dig the imagery of this piece.
You do have quite a talent, young lady.
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Re: Supergirl
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 24th February 2019 @ 02:34:56 AM AEST (User
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I really liked this...
Both loving each other and both afraid of letting it show, at least that/'/s how I take it. You have wonderful imagery here, visually and emotionally. A word painting and a damned good one.
Very well done
I think instead of my usual barkeep remark I will instead offer you Roses.
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Re: Supergirl
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th February 2019 @ 10:46:23 AM AEST (User
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I really like this.
It knocked me out,
how you dedicated it
equally to people who mean
a lot.
It does not need to be understood
by folks who do not know anything
about these folks,
because it demonstrates in its sincerity
how special they are to you,
for many reasons, and over a long period,
at least as long, as time permits.
Supergirl!!!
Peace! |
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