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[title] => Darkness Falls
[time] => 2019-02-13 21:57:35
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Darkness falls, a blackened veil
Wind speaks in a weary wail
Ominous, away I sail
To imagined lands of yore...
Yea through time I wander lost
On my soul the cold and frost
Of the night that does accost
Drifting now forever more...
There in haze of moments past
On horizon eyes are cast
Drinking to the very last
Poisoned drops of yesterday...
Bitter wine, a taste of hell
Conscience speaks, its tale to tell
Of regrets death can /'/ t dispel
As life fades and slips away
L. Carling
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Darkness Falls
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Wednesday, 13th February 2019 @ 09:57:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness falls, a blackened veil
Wind speaks in a weary wail
Ominous, away I sail
To imagined lands of yore...
Yea through time I wander lost
On my soul the cold and frost
Of the night that does accost
Drifting now forever more...
There in haze of moments past
On horizon eyes are cast
Drinking to the very last
Poisoned drops of yesterday...
Bitter wine, a taste of hell
Conscience speaks, its tale to tell
Of regrets death can /'/ t dispel
As life fades and slips away
L. Carling
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Rakerman1999
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2019-02-13 21:57:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Darkness Falls
(User Rating: 1 ) by allforyou on
Thursday, 14th February 2019 @ 12:53:51 AM AEST (User
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This has a quiet beauty that reminds me of snow falling, how it makes everything around me stand still. This inspired me. |
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Re: Darkness Falls
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 14th February 2019 @ 05:18:02 AM AEST (User
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Poisoned drops of yesterday
yes yes great line
in a great flow... |
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Re: Darkness Falls
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 14th February 2019 @ 04:46:01 PM AEST (User
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Wow this was great. Had a dreamy flow in the shadow of darkness! |
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Re: Darkness Falls
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 16th February 2019 @ 01:47:01 AM AEST (User
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beautifully dark. paints a vivid picture of a painful journey. |
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Re: Darkness Falls
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th February 2019 @ 06:18:37 AM AEST (User
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Love the way you rhymed in this one. Excellent writing!
That last stanza wrapped in the sads.
Thank you,
Tim |
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