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[title] => Jaded Vibrance, Realization*s Dream
[time] => 2019-02-05 21:10:33
[hometext] => First attempt at Iambic Pentameter and writing a sonnet in over 20 yrs
[bodytext] => Eyes once bright nevermore vibrantly shine
Heartbeats wander; no longer keeping pace
Upon the wings of whispers bring solace
Since with love, grief and sorrow intertwine
Upon a weathered stone sitting; crying
Heavy breeze upon tear stained cheek does kiss
Stone angels watching; silently sighing
For a lost love a ladened heart does miss
Consciousness adrift a borderless seam
Heart-strings tune to time is somber and jaded
With feelings of loss through time have faded
As within the mind*s eye it is but a dream
Through sorrow and grief love has new hope created
Touched by an angel; caressing daydream
2019
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Jaded Vibrance, Realization*s Dream
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
on
Tuesday, 5th February 2019 @ 09:10:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Eyes once bright nevermore vibrantly shine
Heartbeats wander; no longer keeping pace
Upon the wings of whispers bring solace
Since with love, grief and sorrow intertwine
Upon a weathered stone sitting; crying
Heavy breeze upon tear stained cheek does kiss
Stone angels watching; silently sighing
For a lost love a ladened heart does miss
Consciousness adrift a borderless seam
Heart-strings tune to time is somber and jaded
With feelings of loss through time have faded
As within the mind*s eye it is but a dream
Through sorrow and grief love has new hope created
Touched by an angel; caressing daydream
2019
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Re: Jaded Vibrance, Realization*s Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 6th February 2019 @ 05:34:53 AM AEST (User
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Wow this was very well written and executed.
Far harder to pull off than one realizes.
Certainly out of my reach....
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Re: Jaded Vibrance, Realization*s Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Wednesday, 6th February 2019 @ 08:19:07 PM AEST (User
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Positively charged mood in the words. Love it when melancholy and positive emotions climb in bed together.
You/'/re a darn good poet for an idiot, even an ingenious one. (lol)
I need to read more of your stuff; I note you read and comment on mine, and I/'/m very grateful.
Hats off to you on this somber walk.
Invierno |
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Re: Jaded Vibrance, Realization*s Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Thursday, 7th February 2019 @ 04:49:06 AM AEST (User
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You have walked a very tight rope here, and still the meaning is touching and delicately spoken.
To say what you wish to convey while making it splendidly musical is a labor of dedication to your craft.
You have always given us some profound ideas to consider, but in this venue you have also offered us a song. Melancholy made merry. Sadness and loss dressed in ribbons. How kind of you to sweeten the bitter.
softerware |
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Re: Jaded Vibrance, Realization*s Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 9th February 2019 @ 06:05:46 AM AEST (User
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yay yay yay
I stand and applaud
wow.... |
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Re: Jaded Vibrance, Realization*s Dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 13th February 2019 @ 12:12:08 AM AEST (User
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I/'/m not too good at knowing one method of writing from another. In fact I/'/d say I/'/m totally ignorant about such things. I am, however, quite adept at recognizing poetic talent, emotional depth in poetry and good writing when I see it. So far I/'/ve seen it in everything of yours that I have read.
Very well done
Barkeep! Pour a cold one for my talented friend!
Raker |
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