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MAD!
Contributed by
dorkfish
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:25:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Hatred grown
Anger regressed
Surrounded by actions
Feelings suppressed
Cares broken
Severed ties
Unthoughtful gestures
Meaningless lies
Swarmed by unintentions
Feeding off need
Living for giving up
Another tearful plea
Careless wrongdoings
Selfish comments
Useless conversations
Hurtful vibe sent
Pretending the truth
Feeling no remorse
Painful words
Strong force
Hatred grown
Anger regressed
Surrounded by actions
Feelings suppressed
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dorkfish
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2005-06-30 14:25:45]
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Re: MAD!
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by boobiepeach on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 03:05:28 PM AEST
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wow that is really good. i can feel you talent growing with every write. good use of emotion. this had a wonderful flow to it. i like the repeating as well. you got your anger across wonderfully. stay angry!
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Re: MAD!
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 03:29:28 PM AEST
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Nicely done!! It makes a lot of sense to me! Very creative use of words, and excellent expression. Great job!
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Re: MAD!
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by CarolinaBlue on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 11:07:43 PM AEST
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Wow! great write, I loved it and it made "perfect" sense :-)
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Re: MAD!
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:38:17 PM AEST
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Great usage of words. They got across your anger very well..
Hugs
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Re: MAD!
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:01:41 PM AEST
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"Feeding off need
Living for giving up
Another tearful plea"
I thought your diction was great-
I love how the words: "Anger regressed"
had come full circle..
this is a powerful way to convey a message-
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