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Voodoo dolls and dirty words
They come in flocks and come in herds
Raped and beaten thrown down hard
I got involved and now I’m scarred

Trapped forever in this hole
Can't find my heart I've lost my soul
Tortured hated and so unloved
Tainted ***** pushed and shoved

Stuck forever I can't get out
I can't scream I need to shout
I'm getting scared I'm so afraid
Why am I here why have I stayed?

I've been brainwashed I'm not me
I'm going blind I cannot see
I can't think I'll never know
How to make my feelings show

Get away this isn't right
Fly away free take my flight
Can't escape this hell can't leave this place
Emotionally blank expressionless face
I'm falling deeper into my sorrow
Complete emptiness is soon to follow

I've been sent to hell and can't get out
Now I know what life's about
Tattered and torn no longer complete
I am defeated I have been beat
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 25 [informant] => sublimination [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Animadversion

Contributed by sublimination on Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 10:05:36 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Animadversion

Voodoo dolls and dirty words
They come in flocks and come in herds
Raped and beaten thrown down hard
I got involved and now I’m scarred

Trapped forever in this hole
Can't find my heart I've lost my soul
Tortured hated and so unloved
Tainted ***** pushed and shoved

Stuck forever I can't get out
I can't scream I need to shout
I'm getting scared I'm so afraid
Why am I here why have I stayed?

I've been brainwashed I'm not me
I'm going blind I cannot see
I can't think I'll never know
How to make my feelings show

Get away this isn't right
Fly away free take my flight
Can't escape this hell can't leave this place
Emotionally blank expressionless face
I'm falling deeper into my sorrow
Complete emptiness is soon to follow

I've been sent to hell and can't get out
Now I know what life's about
Tattered and torn no longer complete
I am defeated I have been beat




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Re: Animadversion (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 02:08:35 AM AEST
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with some effort you can climb out of the hole.
great write


Re: Animadversion (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:16:24 AM AEST
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YOU ARE THE CHANGE THAT WORLD NEEDS!!! great write




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