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Array ( [sid] => 99466 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WILL ALWAYS REMAIN [time] => 2005-06-28 07:12:26 [hometext] => Please read this and let me know what you think. Thankyou [bodytext] => As i sit here in my room
An image catches my eye
And after a while i realise
That it's everything i try to hide

I can see a girl so sad in her thoughts
Her tears form a river thats wild
She notices me and starts running like crazy
I chase after her for a while

As i run after her she shows me things
That only i would know
Reminding my soul of all the past hurt
Of events that occured years ago

Suddenly i find myself all alone
And as i look in the river i see
That the scared and sad girl i chased after so fast
Turned out in the end to be me

The next thing i know i'm right back in my room
With a tear falling from my eye
And when i think of what i have seen
I struggle trying not to cry

Believe it or not, to me this makes sence
And a lesson from it can be gained
I may think i've delt with the hurt in my past
But some sadness will always remain

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WILL ALWAYS REMAIN

Contributed by Shorty_88 on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 07:12:26 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

As i sit here in my room
An image catches my eye
And after a while i realise
That it's everything i try to hide

I can see a girl so sad in her thoughts
Her tears form a river thats wild
She notices me and starts running like crazy
I chase after her for a while

As i run after her she shows me things
That only i would know
Reminding my soul of all the past hurt
Of events that occured years ago

Suddenly i find myself all alone
And as i look in the river i see
That the scared and sad girl i chased after so fast
Turned out in the end to be me

The next thing i know i'm right back in my room
With a tear falling from my eye
And when i think of what i have seen
I struggle trying not to cry

Believe it or not, to me this makes sence
And a lesson from it can be gained
I may think i've delt with the hurt in my past
But some sadness will always remain

Copyright © Shorty_88 ... [ 2005-06-28 07:12:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: WILL ALWAYS REMAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by budge on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:18:07 AM AEST
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a genuine emotion transferred beautifully in words everyone reflects on themselves so this poem should appeal to alot of other readers as it did to me well done!!!

Re: WILL ALWAYS REMAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 11:49:17 AM AEST
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Outstanding write. Saddness can play a dramantic part on ones self. Try and be happy.........in and out. Liked it

Brew~

Re: WILL ALWAYS REMAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 11:57:37 AM AEST
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sweet bitter tears of saddness
well written
deep Innervision

Re: WILL ALWAYS REMAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 09:39:45 PM AEST
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a very deliberate write..
filled with longing and the hope that things will be ok..

I really love the last stanza-
nice even flow..
throughout as well.

Great write

B

Re: WILL ALWAYS REMAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 09:49:32 PM AEST
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excellent poem.
i liked it alot...we all try to run from ourselves at times...as long as we catch up, things will be fine.

wizard

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