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i the bubbling water
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 03:12:46 PM in AEST
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i can see the bubbles surface
it is starting to boil
failing to hurt it
none of it foiled
entrapping the water
steel walls on all sides
forgetting to retreat
searching for a place to hide
the bubbles grow larger
i hear each one burst
and never ending the fated search
of hunger and thirst
symbolizing my insides
caving in the explosions
fearing i wont be saved
heroes never chosen
i the bubbling water
hates the steel room
where i cant find a place to thrive
hidden in my doom
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Re: i the bubbling water
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 07:32:41 PM AEST
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Okay!! this one's good.. i mean, really. the imagery of the boiling water while being in the pot is pure imagination
great stuff.. it's very creative. and to those who never read it? have really missed out
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