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Array ( [sid] => 99290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Teddy [time] => 2005-06-25 09:38:25 [hometext] => a note from my son to his favorite bear :-) [bodytext] => You do nothing all day
but stare straight ahead,
While you sit all alone
propped up on my bed.

So cute and cuddly
and soft to the touch.
Though you'll never realize
that I love you this much.

I wish that you could talk,
although I know that you cannot.
If only you could move
from your little lonely spot.

You're the one who keeps my secrets,
and my guardian at night.
No longer scared to go to sleep,
when mom turns off the light.

I always hope you'll be here,
many good times yet to share.
You're my best friend in the world.
My cuddly teddy bear.
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 5 [informant] => CarolinaBlue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChildrensPoetry )

My Teddy

Contributed by CarolinaBlue on Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 09:38:25 AM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry

You do nothing all day
but stare straight ahead,
While you sit all alone
propped up on my bed.

So cute and cuddly
and soft to the touch.
Though you'll never realize
that I love you this much.

I wish that you could talk,
although I know that you cannot.
If only you could move
from your little lonely spot.

You're the one who keeps my secrets,
and my guardian at night.
No longer scared to go to sleep,
when mom turns off the light.

I always hope you'll be here,
many good times yet to share.
You're my best friend in the world.
My cuddly teddy bear.

Copyright © CarolinaBlue ... [ 2005-06-25 09:38:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Teddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Shorty_88 on Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 06:51:02 PM AEST
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Great Job. Your poem was really nice. keep up the good stuff

Re: My Teddy (User Rating: 1 )
by jilted on Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 09:07:10 PM AEST
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This is nice. There is nothing more beautiful than the innocence of a child.

Re: My Teddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 05:25:04 AM AEST
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So refreshing to read such a lovely write..
it's so sweet and poignant,
stirring up many memories of my own childhood.

I adore this-

B

Re: My Teddy (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 02:59:45 PM AEST
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Awww I really this...You kept a great flow, and told a wonderful story! Nicely done.

Scorp.

Re: My Teddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 11:16:36 AM AEST
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That was so cute. I love this one!

Re: My Teddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 12:10:38 AM AEST
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Adorable write... brings me some great memories....
Jenni

Re: My Teddy (User Rating: 1 )
by RoxyGirl on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:54:34 AM AEST
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I loved your poem it was so cute. And maybe its a good thing that your cuddly teddy can not talk because your secret will always be unknown to others no matter what.
LOVE ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
ROXYGIRL

Re: My Teddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Zandria on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 07:05:12 AM AEST
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This was adorable! Very touching!

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