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Array ( [sid] => 9914 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => too young [time] => 2003-01-07 04:20:00 [hometext] => this is about runing from life what my father did all the time [bodytext] => To young to die
To heavy to fly
To late to say goodbye
now I here the words why?
I will leave you behind
i will go through life with a tear i my eye
i will get out of here and not look back
no not, look back
i will never look back
to see this day
life is full of paths to take
you look down and find a way
you begin to walk and then fad away
you're too young to die
to heavy to fly
and it's to late to say goodbye
i will find you one day
look you in the eye and say
your too young to die
too young to die [comments] => 5 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 48 [informant] => chantel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

too young

Contributed by chantel on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

To young to die
To heavy to fly
To late to say goodbye
now I here the words why?
I will leave you behind
i will go through life with a tear i my eye
i will get out of here and not look back
no not, look back
i will never look back
to see this day
life is full of paths to take
you look down and find a way
you begin to walk and then fad away
you're too young to die
to heavy to fly
and it's to late to say goodbye
i will find you one day
look you in the eye and say
your too young to die
too young to die

Copyright © chantel ... [ 2003-01-07 04:20:00]
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Re: too young (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 01:19:09 PM AEST
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although this was a very sad write,I liked this one! Good peice!Christina

Re: too young (User Rating: 1 )
by chantel on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 01:37:17 PM AEST
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thank you i accept your opinion you have some good points have a nice day
chantel

Re: too young (User Rating: 1 )
by okokjazz on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 01:58:56 PM AEST
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i like the sense of rhythm in this; it conveys the emotion most effectively

Re: too young (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:44:50 PM AEST
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A sad but enjoyable read....
Jenni

Re: too young (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:51:22 AM AEST
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Awww this is so sad and so beautifully written, i think way to many of us tend to run from life at one point or another and sometimes we don't even realize that's what were doing. I think this poem is full of reality and so full of emotion .....thank you Chantel for sharing this one it's a beautiful write...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

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