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I gave myself
Contributed by
feathercut
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Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:15:38 PM in AEST
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Love is coming to defeat us all sitting in an empty basement hanging on the walls
Come into my detox room she crawls through the window holds my feverous body fixes my junky soul
All through the night try to tare stars out of my mind come here you are mine your my little girl
Wings torn faces to the ground this hollow truth that we have found under this burnt out sky we sit down cut ourselves into two Well i, gave myself to you
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2005-06-22 12:15:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I gave myself
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fears on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:19:38 PM AEST (User
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Thats pretty deep.
I liked it alot. This
Stanza especaily...
Love is coming to defeat us all
sitting in an empty basement
hanging on the walls
It seems liek youo are verry talented so keep writing!
~Cady
TMb if wanna.
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Re: I gave myself
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jen54 on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:08:09 PM AEST (User
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| good job I like it.keep up the good work |
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