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Array ( [sid] => 98652 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Card castles crash [time] => 2005-06-19 21:19:10 [hometext] => this is about relationships how it takes so many to go wrong so that one to go perfectly right thats why i tell ppl never to give up i dont know if anyone will get it though but read anyways [bodytext] =>

Something new came into play
I almost felt at home
But I was the only one in the game
So I felt more alone
And my palace came crashing down
As things that should not be often do

Card castles fall
Romance comes and fades
Comfort comes and falls away
Into obscurity
The undersetting was cratering
It gave into its self

A new one is put in its place
Built up of hopes and dreams
A foundation that can
Take the ware of a thousand years and more
It will be there and see the end of you and me
At least in this life time

But in this one I
Stand and watch you
On the graying tower
“Still and transfixed”
Gazing at the I love
Angels that come and lose their wing

As they lost theirs you
Gave me mine
And when it comes to you
I can’t advert
My gaze from something
So perfect and so beautiful

What we have
Will never come undone
You are not just my home
You are my whole world
That is one thing no one in my past
Has ever been or could ever be
You are the only one for me

Something new came into play
I have never felt so at home
We both play this game well
We make it real
We will never be alone
I won’t let this palace crash
Nothing has ever felt more right
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Card castles crash

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:19:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems





Something new came into play
I almost felt at home
But I was the only one in the game
So I felt more alone
And my palace came crashing down
As things that should not be often do

Card castles fall
Romance comes and fades
Comfort comes and falls away
Into obscurity
The undersetting was cratering
It gave into its self

A new one is put in its place
Built up of hopes and dreams
A foundation that can
Take the ware of a thousand years and more
It will be there and see the end of you and me
At least in this life time

But in this one I
Stand and watch you
On the graying tower
“Still and transfixed”
Gazing at the I love
Angels that come and lose their wing

As they lost theirs you
Gave me mine
And when it comes to you
I can’t advert
My gaze from something
So perfect and so beautiful

What we have
Will never come undone
You are not just my home
You are my whole world
That is one thing no one in my past
Has ever been or could ever be
You are the only one for me

Something new came into play
I have never felt so at home
We both play this game well
We make it real
We will never be alone
I won’t let this palace crash
Nothing has ever felt more right




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Re: Card castles crash (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:41:33 PM AEST
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Moving words john...

Im glad you castle is now steady...well done.


Re: Card castles crash (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:46:18 PM AEST
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Very impressive writing.
A masterpeice.

awesome.
huggs,
emy


Re: Card castles crash (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 11:47:06 PM AEST
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strong castles and a beautiful view from all sides, built by strong hands and held together by faith, the walls will withstand so much,amazing write. muaw


Re: Card castles crash (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 01:31:39 PM AEST
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nice write good advice to . . .

Ben




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