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Array ( [sid] => 98418 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my life [time] => 2005-06-17 22:07:38 [hometext] => this is about my life about 84 days ago and now i am coming out of the darkness all thanks to :gretchen, jason, tabatha, amy & many many more thank you all [bodytext] => even though i know
it is hard to see
through my eyes
it is even harder to see myself
the pain that is deep inside and
it is all a searets to strangers
only friends know the pain
thats hides deep inside
they get worried they tell me not to,
they say they love me but how
do i know that it is true
my heart has been broken
it has been loved it has
went through hell and back
to see today even
if i can't trust ,
my friends will always believe me
they love me when i am happy
they tell me i am beuatiful
but i do not see the beauty
within the darkness
the shadow withiin me
that is my life of my
friends that see the beauty
within the pain [comments] => 1 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 36 [informant] => saved_by_the_x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

my life

Contributed by saved_by_the_x on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:07:38 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

even though i know
it is hard to see
through my eyes
it is even harder to see myself
the pain that is deep inside and
it is all a searets to strangers
only friends know the pain
thats hides deep inside
they get worried they tell me not to,
they say they love me but how
do i know that it is true
my heart has been broken
it has been loved it has
went through hell and back
to see today even
if i can't trust ,
my friends will always believe me
they love me when i am happy
they tell me i am beuatiful
but i do not see the beauty
within the darkness
the shadow withiin me
that is my life of my
friends that see the beauty
within the pain

Copyright © saved_by_the_x ... [ 2005-06-17 22:07:38]
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Re: my life (User Rating: 1 )
by OnAngelswings on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 03:07:55 PM AEST
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Sweetheart...we all go through these dark moments in our lives...the secret is to give it all up to the Lord and move one with your life...he'll take care of it all...things will get better and BETTER from then on!!!! Your a talented writer...keep them coming....Shari :)

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