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Array ( [sid] => 9836 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Queen of Words [time] => 2003-01-06 02:40:00 [hometext] => ...sometimes you have to stand for what you know is right and true... [bodytext] => Who died and left you the queen of words? Aye?
In your smugly fitting antique colour-less worldly way?
Only communicating with me by proxy now nay not at all...
Winter is here inside my heart with you and here shall remain.
Hey that was a long short interesting boring conversation held
one afternoon, as you left off because things weren't your way.
Certainly 'ere my way, or so you would like to believe, keep it on.
Unable to forgive, forget, let it slide in the nothingness undergone.

Nay not I, to giving into your consternation, you foolish being.
'Twill be you come to me not vice verse me to you for even seeing.
You'll cross over to the other realms long before me I suppose,
but then again this life makes me so tired, so I don't really know.
'Tis not a pretty, kind or faire deed you have done; but fallow.
Openingly giving slighting same; queen of two faced shallows.
Often been told that I'm beautifully funny and ravishing in this hue.
So surely me so ravishingly seethingly cute as I sit and write of you!


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Queen of Words

Contributed by ladyfawn on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Who died and left you the queen of words? Aye?
In your smugly fitting antique colour-less worldly way?
Only communicating with me by proxy now nay not at all...
Winter is here inside my heart with you and here shall remain.
Hey that was a long short interesting boring conversation held
one afternoon, as you left off because things weren't your way.
Certainly 'ere my way, or so you would like to believe, keep it on.
Unable to forgive, forget, let it slide in the nothingness undergone.

Nay not I, to giving into your consternation, you foolish being.
'Twill be you come to me not vice verse me to you for even seeing.
You'll cross over to the other realms long before me I suppose,
but then again this life makes me so tired, so I don't really know.
'Tis not a pretty, kind or faire deed you have done; but fallow.
Openingly giving slighting same; queen of two faced shallows.
Often been told that I'm beautifully funny and ravishing in this hue.
So surely me so ravishingly seethingly cute as I sit and write of you!






Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2003-01-06 02:40:00]
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Re: Queen of Words (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 04:30:30 AM AEST
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Oh ... I would say this is one of the best poems you have written ... but I guess this is one of those poems that is very personal and difficult for one to comment on.

I pray earnestly that things sort themselves out ... because I know there are BIG hearts involved, and I hate to see such pain. :(((


Re: Queen of Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 05:58:27 AM AEST
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Ouch...... nuff said....
Jenni


Re: Queen of Words (User Rating: 1 )
by nomad on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 03:18:16 PM AEST
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This is a great write, Nessa. You tell a captivating story of "failure to communicate" by one who seems more inclined to win than to understand, and when faced with opposiing views leaves the conversation. Too often the case. Good for you: Assert your rights AND your being.


Re: Queen of Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 09:57:25 PM AEST
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like everyone else said hard to comment on but yeah ouch


Re: Queen of Words (User Rating: 1 )
by UpsAndDowns on Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 11:27:09 AM AEST
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Communication can be the origin of success or failure. In this case is appears the later. I enjoyed the old english style.


Re: Queen of Words (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 10:22:58 AM AEST
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Bahahaha! Okay, I am so wrong here, but I just love this! ;)
Thank goodness we live so far apart, yet, what fun it could be.
I like the sharpness to your words with many smirk-inducing lines.


This might be my favourite:


Hey that was a long short interesting boring conversation held


ZING!



Queen of Words? YEP!



~Scorp




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