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Tears are blocked off, unable to find a way out to help me let go. So I hold it inside until it spills over, and there is nothing left of the sanity that’s been keeping it in.
Tears are a river of pain, bleeding so that I don’t have to, flowing free only once in a light night. Never ending never beginning,
Tears are draining, emotionally, physically, and mentally. Making me sick whenever I cry, on the inside and out.
Tears are the only thing that I won’t let myself feel, the thing that I long for, and the thing that I hate. Keeping me alive in my black world of solitude.
Tears are nothing but water trickling from your eyes but they make you feel so refreshed as if they fell to cleanse you.
Tears are frightening, making me too scared to show them. Because when I let them fall the world falls with them.
Tears are a far off dream, a land that exists only in childhood memories. In a world where weakness is ok, too bad that world doesn’t exist.
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Tears

Contributed by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:47:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Tears are a far off dream, a land that exists only in childhood memories. In a world where weakness is ok, too bad that world doesn’t exist.
Tears are blocked off, unable to find a way out to help me let go. So I hold it inside until it spills over, and there is nothing left of the sanity that’s been keeping it in.
Tears are a river of pain, bleeding so that I don’t have to, flowing free only once in a light night. Never ending never beginning,
Tears are draining, emotionally, physically, and mentally. Making me sick whenever I cry, on the inside and out.
Tears are the only thing that I won’t let myself feel, the thing that I long for, and the thing that I hate. Keeping me alive in my black world of solitude.
Tears are nothing but water trickling from your eyes but they make you feel so refreshed as if they fell to cleanse you.
Tears are frightening, making me too scared to show them. Because when I let them fall the world falls with them.
Tears are a far off dream, a land that exists only in childhood memories. In a world where weakness is ok, too bad that world doesn’t exist.




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Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Rikki on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:57:26 PM AEST
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I like how it ends where it began.


Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by carebear_06 on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:17:52 AM AEST
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i belive that good poetry makes you feel emotions. this poem made your friend cry. so to me its a good poem


Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 03:24:08 AM AEST
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U un stopped the drain.
A masterpeice.
huggs,
emy


Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 07:49:00 AM AEST
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You already know what I've said about this one :) I love it. The line:
"Tears are the only thing that I won’t let myself feel, the thing that I long for, and the thing that I hate. Keeping me alive in my black world of solitude."
Is my favorite

Keep writing Karis
--amanda--




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