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[aid] => mick
[title] => Prayer
[time] => 2005-06-16 12:47:38
[hometext] => Fictional.
[bodytext] => Lord please help make my dreams come true
knowing full well I no longer believe in you
My belief was shaky, right from the start
but after too many tragedies You and I had to part
Can't respect someone who would let these things be
Your path and mine---we no longer agree
How can I have faith without any hope?
How can I trudge on, and be expected to cope?
I've given you several chances to prove yourself to me
now I come to you again with this final plea
Please separate my breath from my body, and set me free...
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[informant] => hauntedscorp
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[ratings] => 5
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[topicname] => anguished
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Prayer
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:47:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Lord please help make my dreams come true
knowing full well I no longer believe in you
My belief was shaky, right from the start
but after too many tragedies You and I had to part
Can't respect someone who would let these things be
Your path and mine---we no longer agree
How can I have faith without any hope?
How can I trudge on, and be expected to cope?
I've given you several chances to prove yourself to me
now I come to you again with this final plea
Please separate my breath from my body, and set me free...
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Re: Prayer
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by heartbroken4ever on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:54:54 PM AEST
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Great Write! Something I can relate too.
Amber |
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Re: Prayer
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by Sherah on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 01:24:10 PM AEST
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| Well even though this is a fictional poem. Some people can relate to it , me being one of those people. I did separate my self from God.. But Now I have found him again....Thank God !!! LOL.....Great Poem!!!! |
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Re: Prayer
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 01:45:17 PM AEST
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| Fictional she says….its not Fictional its life in all its glory. Used to be strong with God I knew all about him and studied His word all the time. But there comes a time in your life (maybe it was after he ***** me over and over again) when you loss faith. It was a great right and I wish it wasn’t true of my life but how can you love someone that doesn’t love you. Take care my friend and keep up the good writes, your friend….Steve |
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Re: Prayer
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by gwenevere on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 03:51:19 PM AEST
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| It's not God who's the problem , it's the people who go under the banner of believers who are the biggest hypocrits going.No wonder the world is in such a mess.The amount of horror that is done in the name of religion.Can we blame God for that? |
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Re: Prayer
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:40:19 PM AEST
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A sad and yet beautiful write scorp, touching
the heart as only your poetry can . . .
Ben |
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Re: Prayer
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by boobiepeach on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 04:31:03 PM AEST
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sad, but good
seems like you have had a lot of tragedies
i feel ya. life is full of them
retorical question- why is god always the last place we look to cope? |
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Re: Prayer
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 06:50:15 AM AEST
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He is the ground of your very being scorp. No escaping from this ground.
Do not confuse what is called "Religion" with God, - God is love, - but people of "Religion" have trhrown filth in His face.
Your poem is beautiful, sad - nay tragic.
When the time is right you will becp,e aware of his all-pervading PRESENCE.
Love and peace
Elizabeth Dandy |
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Re: Prayer
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:39:32 PM AEST
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| Beautiful indeed...........i can relate to this sad prayer. |
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Re: Prayer
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:54:03 PM AEST
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Sad but good write...But i have to profess God is the reason we are here..In time you will forgive...Hopefully before it is to late..
Much love.... |
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Re: Prayer
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 1st November 2014 @ 01:46:03 AM AEST
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| I know it says fictional, but I am skeptical of this statement. I know exactly where you are coming from here. over the past few years I have been reevaluating my belief in the Christian God. He seems somewhat incompetent if he is indeed what they say he is. Anyway. very very good. like I said, I have fallen in love with your pen. Your words are a great inspiration in my life. Healing wounds and starting afresh with vigor and boldness. my many thanks |
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Re: Prayer
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2015 @ 12:14:53 PM AEST
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| OMG!!!! I could really feel this!!!! |
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