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Array ( [sid] => 98172 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cut and Carve [time] => 2005-06-15 19:20:36 [hometext] => This is dark; but sometimes, they need to be. Carol [bodytext] => Cut and Carve

The cuts you make
are deep
I feel your fury
and the need
to
dig
deep

Searching
for
soul

You know
it's
there

But
why
so
deep

You cut
and carve
seeking

Red blood
flows

You
watch,
wondering,
If
they
see
it
now

If
they
finally
see

The
flowing
blood

Tears...
of a weeping soul.

Carol [comments] => 6 [counter] => 276 [topic] => 72 [informant] => freckle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

Cut and Carve

Contributed by freckle on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 07:20:36 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

Cut and Carve

The cuts you make
are deep
I feel your fury
and the need
to
dig
deep

Searching
for
soul

You know
it's
there

But
why
so
deep

You cut
and carve
seeking

Red blood
flows

You
watch,
wondering,
If
they
see
it
now

If
they
finally
see

The
flowing
blood

Tears...
of a weeping soul.

Carol

Copyright © freckle ... [ 2005-06-15 19:20:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cut and Carve (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:37:30 PM AEST
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i think this would make a good song. something i noticed in this is that it could flow better, especially at the end. it definantly stood out because it just seemed completely different but using the flowing blood are tears of a weeping soul to make it read better. heres an idea for you, you could always try to write a poem in the shape of a tear drop =]

Re: Cut and Carve (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:11:09 AM AEST
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You write with such simplicity and yet true conviction love your style . . .

Ben

Re: Cut and Carve (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:43:22 AM AEST
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Wow im supprised to see a dark poem from you Carolita. And i must say i enjoyed this. It was writen.

Hope to see more like this soon C.

Jane xoxox

Re: Cut and Carve (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 06:05:38 PM AEST
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So heartfelt Carol---excellent expression. I hope this isn't about you...I hope everything's okay. Nice job.
Scorp.

Re: Cut and Carve (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:35:32 PM AEST
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I agree with DorianC.
simplicity is best-

I loved it as well.

B

Re: Cut and Carve (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 03:51:18 AM AEST
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wow, this is AMAZING, well done

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