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Shudders in the dark
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:07:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It is three twenty two in the morning. White clouds called stars hide in the approaching dawn, hide in the failed and fallen fields fluttering wings and rain. It is morning calling darkness a friend calling love a whore and whores breath a friend. The form and figure, my form and figure naked in the window, pressed naked in the grass stained jeans; the endless stream of urine. The endlessness of urine coloring the dead, brown leaves A bright dead, brown day mists over the rain show sets it's diamonds, quartz and death pecking away at my face. It is a vomit vomiting my sheets, a vomit; my sheets are vomit black and death, a vast black and yellow birth of sweat, spittle and silk wrapped with silk and sudden shudders in the dark.
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Re: Shudders in the dark
(User Rating: 1 ) by razorbladesangel45 on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:26:03 PM AEST (User
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| wow! awsome use of vocabulary and feelings, GREAT WORK |
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