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I wont cry, I wont bleed.
My soul is gone, I didnt want it
I didnt need to, It wasnt being used.
My life is ripped and torn
you dont need to mourn
slash my wrists, I insist
You wont get a drop from me.
Im a withered wreck
I witnessed my own death
one that you could not see.
Inside this shell is a burning hell
that you or me could not believe.
No tears in my eyes, I cannot cry
No fear in my life, I cannot die
No thoughts in my head, my mind is dead.
I try to think but i shake and shiver
my whole body wobbles and quivers
I can see Fear and punishment
I can hear satanic chants
I wasnt given a second chance.
I sold my heart and my soul
now i hear the bell toll
its calling for me, i cannot see
the darkness is all around me
This place is just a hole
where one goes when he loses his soul. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 13 [informant] => kritic_killer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

personal hell

Contributed by kritic_killer on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 04:37:55 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Cut a piece out of me
I wont cry, I wont bleed.
My soul is gone, I didnt want it
I didnt need to, It wasnt being used.
My life is ripped and torn
you dont need to mourn
slash my wrists, I insist
You wont get a drop from me.
Im a withered wreck
I witnessed my own death
one that you could not see.
Inside this shell is a burning hell
that you or me could not believe.
No tears in my eyes, I cannot cry
No fear in my life, I cannot die
No thoughts in my head, my mind is dead.
I try to think but i shake and shiver
my whole body wobbles and quivers
I can see Fear and punishment
I can hear satanic chants
I wasnt given a second chance.
I sold my heart and my soul
now i hear the bell toll
its calling for me, i cannot see
the darkness is all around me
This place is just a hole
where one goes when he loses his soul.

Copyright © kritic_killer ... [ 2005-06-14 04:37:55]
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Re: personal hell (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 06:37:44 AM AEST
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powerful words, i liked this, it was a pleasure to read.

Well done to you

Re: personal hell (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:51:41 AM AEST
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Very powerful write! I can really relate to this I expirience a time like this but never put it in to words- you did. Amazing write!

*5 stars!
I'm starting to like your style!

--amanda--

Re: personal hell (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:51:41 AM AEST
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Very powerful write! I can really relate to this I expirience a time like this but never put it in to words- you did. Amazing write!

*5 stars!
I'm starting to like your style!

--amanda--

Re: personal hell (User Rating: 1 )
by burningintherain14 on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 06:10:42 PM AEST
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Wow, that was an amazing poem! Keep up the good work!! Love Always and Forever-x- Heather

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