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Array ( [sid] => 97950 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a place called home [time] => 2005-06-13 20:24:41 [hometext] => this is the first one i've written in a long time so tell me what u think [bodytext] => There is a place
that im yearning for
i refer to it as home
the thing is
my house is
nothing of the sort

my home is a place
with a guy to love

my home is a place
where it is summer every day

my home is a place
where my bed is a cloud

This is a place where
the sun allways shines
and we walk on warm sand
everyone lives on the lake
and i can allways hang with my friends
here there is no difficulty

home is a place
where i dont have
to worry about my brother
and where he loves me
like i allways have him

home is a place where
no one i care about
wastes their love
on someone who is not worthy
and you always know when they are

home is a place
where there are no drugs
and i would see my
uncle marty everyday
and he would still be sane
home is a place
where i would know
my grandfather
insted of his drinking habits

this place called home
is a place in my dreams
often my mind wanders here
and i realise it would never happen
because it is a perfect place
and nothing is perfect

not in this world at least [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 14 [informant] => wakegurl77 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

a place called home

Contributed by wakegurl77 on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 08:24:41 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

There is a place
that im yearning for
i refer to it as home
the thing is
my house is
nothing of the sort

my home is a place
with a guy to love

my home is a place
where it is summer every day

my home is a place
where my bed is a cloud

This is a place where
the sun allways shines
and we walk on warm sand
everyone lives on the lake
and i can allways hang with my friends
here there is no difficulty

home is a place
where i dont have
to worry about my brother
and where he loves me
like i allways have him

home is a place where
no one i care about
wastes their love
on someone who is not worthy
and you always know when they are

home is a place
where there are no drugs
and i would see my
uncle marty everyday
and he would still be sane
home is a place
where i would know
my grandfather
insted of his drinking habits

this place called home
is a place in my dreams
often my mind wanders here
and i realise it would never happen
because it is a perfect place
and nothing is perfect

not in this world at least

Copyright © wakegurl77 ... [ 2005-06-13 20:24:41]
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Re: a place called home (User Rating: 1 )
by Arden on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:55:37 PM AEST
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"and i realise it would never happen
because it is a perfect place
and nothing is perfect

not in this world at least"

You know, that is very true. i can tell this is a very personal poem and i am glad that you shared it. :)
the wording needs to be touched up a bit and your english needs work, but i'm just nit-picking. its what i do lol.
i liked this. well done, keep it up.
-Arden

Re: a place called home (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 12:31:24 AM AEST
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Awesome masterpeice of truth.
huggs,
emy

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