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Smile
Contributed by
Boobiepeach
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 06:12:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Stone gathered moss
Although it has rolled
Years of thoughts
But still one untold
All of the stiff
The shaky the cold
But still just one smile
In which I was sold
Have seen it before
Not new but rarely old
On blankets of loneliness
On which I dont fold
Words that he spoke
Knew nothing of bold
A gaze meant to kill
A touch to unload
But warm turns to cold
Lies have been sold
But still just one smile
In mind wont grow old
Copyright ©
Boobiepeach
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2005-06-13 18:12:26]
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Re: Smile
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by wakegurl77 on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 08:55:02 PM AEST
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amazing write....deep...
leana
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Re: Smile
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by Willofree on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:55:32 PM AEST
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An intriguing poem that is very well done. I'm not sure if I got the message, but it appears to depict getting old physically, but remaining young in mind and thought....?
Good write
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