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On everything I feel

Your smiling face and sugar taste,
Such beauty, such appeal

The day we met, I shan't forget,
Opening to you

And before we kissed, I did not exist
Now my love anew

For your gentle touch, I long so much
and your passionate embrace

Your glowing smile, your flowing style
and my lips against your face

With you by my side, I feel inside,
this feeling so unreal,

My heart...complete, my dear so sweet,
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Everything I Feel

Contributed by wizard on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 10:59:51 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

This for you, a tale so true,
On everything I feel

Your smiling face and sugar taste,
Such beauty, such appeal

The day we met, I shan't forget,
Opening to you

And before we kissed, I did not exist
Now my love anew

For your gentle touch, I long so much
and your passionate embrace

Your glowing smile, your flowing style
and my lips against your face

With you by my side, I feel inside,
this feeling so unreal,

My heart...complete, my dear so sweet,
this feeling so surreal

Copyright © wizard ... [ 2005-06-10 10:59:51]
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Re: Everything I Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 01:02:52 PM AEST
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AHHHHH!!!!! Lovely.So good to read a happy poem.Well Done

Re: Everything I Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 01:28:17 PM AEST
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Fantastic, Wiz. Hope this is for real and you are walking on air.

smiles,
Rita

Re: Everything I Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:11:12 PM AEST
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it seems that each and every stanza was a poem within itself..
splendid simplicity...
a majestic write..5 stars on this one bro..

Billy

Re: Everything I Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 11:20:24 PM AEST
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very nice, very nice indeed. one of the few happy poems i have read and will ever read, and if they are all like these, i might have to read a few more =]

Re: Everything I Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:21:29 PM AEST
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*smile* Nice job Wiz...Well done, I like this...

Scorp.

Re: Everything I Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:48:28 PM AEST
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That was so sweet and romantic. You have an amaing talent for capturing what love feels like. Great emotions and great write!

Re: Everything I Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:37:13 PM AEST
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"before we kissed, I did not exist"

That has got to be one of the most striking lines I've read.

EVER!

That, in itself, is staggering. And when wholly encompassed
by the remainder . . . how delicately tender.

Beautiful. Every word !!

~Breezy
[eh?]

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