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Array ( [sid] => 97514 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => will i make it? [time] => 2005-06-10 00:30:31 [hometext] => I wonder somedays if I will make it. make it through life, or the year, or even just the day. I'm tired of feeling like this all the time. comments and feedback appreciated [bodytext] => I walk through the halls in a daze
Music blaring to drown everyone out.
I say I can make it through the day,
But that I really doubt.
The voices are getting too strong,
For me to handle on my own
I should just give up
I can’t make it through, I should’ve known.
There is no reason
As far as I can tell
That I am being put through
This life I call hell
I’m just sick of the way I am
I’m sick of all the pain
I don’t want to make people cry anymore
I feel like I’m going insane
I’m afraid of what I become
When my room goes dark
When I turn the lights out
That’s when I make my mark
People get mad
When I don’t go to bed
But they don’t see that I can’t,
With all these thoughts in my head.
I just have to wait for the day
When this all gets easier for me
But what will happen between now and then?
And when will that day be?
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 32 [informant] => brokengirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
will i make it?

Contributed by brokengirl on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:30:31 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I walk through the halls in a daze
Music blaring to drown everyone out.
I say I can make it through the day,
But that I really doubt.
The voices are getting too strong,
For me to handle on my own
I should just give up
I can’t make it through, I should’ve known.
There is no reason
As far as I can tell
That I am being put through
This life I call hell
I’m just sick of the way I am
I’m sick of all the pain
I don’t want to make people cry anymore
I feel like I’m going insane
I’m afraid of what I become
When my room goes dark
When I turn the lights out
That’s when I make my mark
People get mad
When I don’t go to bed
But they don’t see that I can’t,
With all these thoughts in my head.
I just have to wait for the day
When this all gets easier for me
But what will happen between now and then?
And when will that day be?




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Re: will i make it? (User Rating: 1 )
by cutes252 on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:40:56 AM AEST
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i feel the same way


Re: will i make it? (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 08:26:52 AM AEST
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ooo i really loved this poem, i feel the same way!!! my rents will never get this...all they think is that I am being stupid if i complain about the hell my hs is...i really hate that kind of opinion, well awesome poem friend keep em coming
kc


Re: will i make it? (User Rating: 1 )
by rosethorn100 on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 08:36:03 AM AEST
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very well express poem - i've stop counting the days i felt that way - we just have to keep believing and not give up that thing will get better - if not so then we need help - sadly lots of people don't do that.

may the day come for and try and be positive easier said then done i know.

god bless you and good luck
rosey


Re: will i make it? (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:54:40 AM AEST
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I think you will. You have a will for life, and it still battles strong, I think from your words. I pray you'll make it. You do matter to God and many people. They care. As do I.
Take care of yourself.
David




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