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Array ( [sid] => 97420 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => she said [time] => 2005-06-09 11:51:25 [hometext] => this girl had to break the shell around me... [bodytext] => she took me away
and said "i am here"
i said you can't stay
you're all that i fear

she took me today
and said "yes i feel"
i said you can't stay
your time i won't steal

she shook me again
and said "let's go tomorrow"
i said you're my friend
but my best friend is sorrow

she walked through a storm
and said "let's just go on"
i said no silence no more
i want you till dawn..

so i can tell you... that i love you my girl.

dw

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => In_a_While [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

she said

Contributed by In_a_While on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 11:51:25 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

she took me away
and said "i am here"
i said you can't stay
you're all that i fear

she took me today
and said "yes i feel"
i said you can't stay
your time i won't steal

she shook me again
and said "let's go tomorrow"
i said you're my friend
but my best friend is sorrow

she walked through a storm
and said "let's just go on"
i said no silence no more
i want you till dawn..

so i can tell you... that i love you my girl.

dw

Copyright Â© In_a_While ... [ 2005-06-09 11:51:25]
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Re: she said (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 06:25:57 AM AEST
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I just want to know how you can get no comments on this write it was very good. It has a very different style but its not often you see perfection in a style such as this. But one question I have for you is this true did you find a girl you can be with and maybe love. If so I’m happy for you and hope all goes well. You’re a nice guy and a great writer and I hope this is someone you can share that with. Take care my friend and keep up the good writes….Steve

Re: she said (User Rating: 1 )
by KarlaMarie on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 05:37:28 AM AEST
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I thought this was a lovely poem, and i quite enjoyed it. it was sweet and i am glad you found a girl who did break the shell...

KarlaMarie

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