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Array ( [sid] => 97399 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Changing the World [time] => 2005-06-09 08:25:21 [hometext] => surprizingly upbeat and postive, don't worry dark lovers I'm posting a horribly depressing one tonight...but idk something today had given me hope I think its the end of the school year but i really couldn't say [bodytext] => timing is perfect
the moment is now
if I don't make it happen
it will happen somehow

but if i make it mine
i will share in the blame
but also in glory
will be added to my name

I hear of changes
but see none come true
so I am a fighter
regardless of truth

If the world won't change
then I'll change the world
won't fight stupid battles thou
I will fight what they are worth

wether the battle ends
beautifully so
or wether the battle is
a bloody throw

nothing will stop me
I am ready to charge
to change how I am living
to change who we are [comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 14 [informant] => spazz911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Changing the World

Contributed by spazz911 on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 08:25:21 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

timing is perfect
the moment is now
if I don't make it happen
it will happen somehow

but if i make it mine
i will share in the blame
but also in glory
will be added to my name

I hear of changes
but see none come true
so I am a fighter
regardless of truth

If the world won't change
then I'll change the world
won't fight stupid battles thou
I will fight what they are worth

wether the battle ends
beautifully so
or wether the battle is
a bloody throw

nothing will stop me
I am ready to charge
to change how I am living
to change who we are

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-06-09 08:25:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Changing the World (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 11:07:29 AM AEST
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I really love the positive upbeat tone of this poem. But not just positive, but confident and self assured. If my opinion counts, lol, would love to see another one like this one tonite!

Re: Changing the World (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:42:39 PM AEST
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now what happened to this attitude? u CAN change the world ... i know u have it in u. heck youre so freaking smart u could be the first woman president. nothing can stop ya cas, nothin can stop ya.
jennie*

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