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Array ( [sid] => 9737 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Suicide- I'm Sorry... [time] => 2003-01-04 13:20:00 [hometext] => Just a lil sumthing i think about...not a big deal. wrote it a long time ago. Peace. [bodytext] => I sit on the floor staring deeply at the wall,
Maybe trying to see through it, surpassing it all.
I dream stupid dreams in the middle of the night.
Dreams about friends, death, my own fight.
My eyes move away from that ugly blue wall,
To look at myself, in such great appall.

I’m ugly and I have no future ahead,
So what’s the point, in continuing this dread?
So I pick up that razor blade and shove it inside,
Only to think “Have I committed suicide?”
Is this just another nasty dream, that’s inside my mind?
I guess not; I’m starting to shake, my teeth start to grind.

Do I really gotta write the note, with blood dripping down,
Do I leave with a great smile or a sad frown?
I reach out to those who I knew really cared,
But they didn’t see the look in my eyes, when I was really scared.
I’m just another statistic, another blind cutter,
Dreaming of death, as blood starts to sputter.

For my friends I did love you and my family too,
I guess you deserve many thank yous.
But I’m running out of time, I really should go,
Before my pain really does start to show.
And for all of those who have to clean up the scene,
It’s just another life of a depressed, mixed up teen.

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Suicide- I'm Sorry...

Contributed by Lost4EvEr1541 on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I sit on the floor staring deeply at the wall,
Maybe trying to see through it, surpassing it all.
I dream stupid dreams in the middle of the night.
Dreams about friends, death, my own fight.
My eyes move away from that ugly blue wall,
To look at myself, in such great appall.

I’m ugly and I have no future ahead,
So what’s the point, in continuing this dread?
So I pick up that razor blade and shove it inside,
Only to think “Have I committed suicide?”
Is this just another nasty dream, that’s inside my mind?
I guess not; I’m starting to shake, my teeth start to grind.

Do I really gotta write the note, with blood dripping down,
Do I leave with a great smile or a sad frown?
I reach out to those who I knew really cared,
But they didn’t see the look in my eyes, when I was really scared.
I’m just another statistic, another blind cutter,
Dreaming of death, as blood starts to sputter.

For my friends I did love you and my family too,
I guess you deserve many thank yous.
But I’m running out of time, I really should go,
Before my pain really does start to show.
And for all of those who have to clean up the scene,
It’s just another life of a depressed, mixed up teen.

~It's life...you gotta deal or die~

Copyright Â© Lost4EvEr1541 ... [ 2003-01-04 13:20:00]
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Re: Suicide- I'm Sorry... (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 04:35:15 PM AEST
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this is so sad...please remember, you are not alone...

Re: Suicide- I'm Sorry... (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:19:08 PM AEST
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Wow I'm just blown away. So much pain I could relate. Its hard being a teenager, nobody seems to understand. Just hold on. I hope things get better for you. Nicely written though.

Re: Suicide- I'm Sorry... (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:44:48 PM AEST
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Wow... to say this was good is an understatement this was beautiful in its own morbid way. As a fellow teenager I have asked myself those same hard questions. I can say don't give in life is worth living, but when your all alone those words have no meaning. 'I’m just another statistic, another blind cutter,' That line has just so much meaning to me about a year ago I wanted to be another statistic, but now I can see I am just a 'blind cutter'. Its hard, but you can have the strength to pull through... its hard I know that all to well.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Suicide- I'm Sorry... (User Rating: 1 )
by dragonsmist on Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 11:30:32 AM AEST
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::hugs:: you're not alone, my dear. im here for you if you need to talk about anything...i know what you're going through...

for what it's worth, i really liked the poem. keep writing...

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