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Array ( [sid] => 97220 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => eternal flame [time] => 2005-06-07 19:20:42 [hometext] => hope you like it please comment after reading even if you hate it cause i love getting feedback on my work so i can fix it [bodytext] => the higher it gets
the longer it burns
the longer i sit
the more i learn
i can sit and wonder
of what life brings
and what's life's
true meaning
i sit here as the flame grows high
knowing if i lose you
how hard i would cry
an eternal flame can burn forever
and i truly hope we last that way
you bring me so much joy
even though it's been 1 month
i can truly say
i love you
and hope you can stay
your one who understands me
and can truly see
the real me
in the eternal flame
and what i've been thinking [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 2 [informant] => vampirelover [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

eternal flame

Contributed by vampirelover on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:20:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

the higher it gets
the longer it burns
the longer i sit
the more i learn
i can sit and wonder
of what life brings
and what's life's
true meaning
i sit here as the flame grows high
knowing if i lose you
how hard i would cry
an eternal flame can burn forever
and i truly hope we last that way
you bring me so much joy
even though it's been 1 month
i can truly say
i love you
and hope you can stay
your one who understands me
and can truly see
the real me
in the eternal flame
and what i've been thinking

Copyright © vampirelover ... [ 2005-06-07 19:20:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: eternal flame (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:02:46 PM AEST
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nice poem ! thats how i feel right now in my life....i really hope it works out for the best

Re: eternal flame (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:17:35 PM AEST
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I like the poem but it needs to be broken into structured verses. Your spelling is good and you got your point across well. Just seems more like a personal letter than a prose or poem.

smiles
Rita

Re: eternal flame (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 02:24:18 PM AEST
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I like the poem, its straight forward of what you feel. I think I've read one of your poems before and I liked it too. Im not sure if I commented on it though....anyway, my point is, keep up the good work!
Always,
Courtney
-CoCo -XOXO-

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