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**My Death**
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I remember hitting the water,
with death holding my hand,
in my small,red car,
my last sight of land,
the water rushed inside,
i strained so hard to free loose,
but there was no way out,
no way that i could choose,
I remember my last breath,
I prayed there for my life,
but it was already taken,
id never be a mother nor a wife,
i gasped and then i died,
as the past flashed before me,
the last thing i saw was mom,
at home, she was waiting for me,
but i never came back,
yet my soul watches her everyday,
i see her sit and cry there,
theres so much i want to say,
i want her to know im there,
i want to give her a big hug,
but all i catch is air,
she cannot see my love,
"mom! why cant you see me!"
but shes deaf to my screams,
she sets aside my picture,
tears in her eyes gleam,
id give anything to come back,
and take back all of the mean things i said,
i would never had said "i hate you"
and i would never have told you "i wish i was dead."
** I love you mom! **
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2003-01-04 08:00:00]
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Re: **My Death**
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 02:20:55 AM AEST
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Why are all your poems so good? 'with death holding my hand' very well written and vivid line. Don't know what else to say about this...
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Re: **My Death**
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by KatieW629 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 08:22:15 PM AEST
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aww!! thats so good chanti
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