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Life of a Poetor Musing Me
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Poetic firey images read calmly sadly slowly slowly deeply slowly, read in blowing shivering winds of sunless trees eternity wholly.
Absorb you into poetic soul, touching a heart's blackest moment amongst rigmarole.
Poet happy, hopeless, hoping, grouchy; yet sometimes quite ouchy.
Mettling musing sleepless spirit; can you touch it can you hear it?
Great proportion permits anxietys bitter keeper; or mood's illusion mystic, dreaming darkness as the god or still the reaper.
Weep here...
Melody elusive as a butterfly? Why?Why?Why? Why?
Drink bloody feelings in, or let your mind herein begin.
Poems that disassociate, poems that will rejuvenate.
Some are biting frightening feelings now numb-hollow, Some you can scream breathe sweat hope, meet love or love's shadow death's swallow.
Mettling muddy musical musing spirit; can you shadow me forever, can you hear it, can you hear it?!
..did
you
hear
it?
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
... [
2003-01-03 16:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Life of a Poetor Musing Me
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 04:05:05 PM AEST (User
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| no i didnt, sorry. |
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Re: Life of a Poetor Musing Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by S_K_Williamson on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:07:51 AM AEST (User
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I hear it all the time...
Excellent write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: Life of a Poetor Musing Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by spooky on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:29:03 AM AEST (User
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| heavy,,,well written,,spooky |
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Re: Life of a Poetor Musing Me
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 01:24:30 PM AEST (User
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Nah. Nope. Couldn't hear it, although I can agree that muses meddle... they argue too. Oh... *hands mom some cookies she just made* There ya go!
I don't get you poets either.. always writin' stuff that rhymes when all us novelists do is let the muses do the runnin' us ragged and us tireing our poor fingers out. Mwahaha. I love poetry though, although I may have to reread it a few times. Many talented people here though. (All though I don't always comment.) Anyways, things to do and muses to lock in the closet.
Mars |
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Re: Life of a Poetor Musing Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 08:57:06 PM AEST (User
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| rofl I love you Mara:) xx |
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Re: Life of a Poetor Musing Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 09:04:44 PM AEST (User
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| my poems are best read slowly, thank you though for your honesty:) |
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Re: Life of a Poetor Musing Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:23:07 AM AEST (User
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| Nessa, I go through this all the time. I did hear it. Great write. Well written. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Life of a Poetor Musing Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by needledancing on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 10:22:11 PM AEST (User
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We are such a crazy lot I guess. I hear it everytime my feelings button goes off. I hear the words typing up in my head to capture what will not be a lost moment of time. In my world poems are my short stories. My outlines to a whole picture.Poems are our choice.Saves a lot of trees to keep it short.LOL
Yay for the POETS. |
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