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quietly crying
I'm layig here
slowly dying
I take out my knife
and slit my wrists
I see the blood
and curl my fists
thinks get heavy
things go black
I think of my promise
I made a pact
I guess I broke it
I guess I lied
nobody knows
how I wish I died
my life is ending
I think I'm dying
I got my wish
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Dying

Contributed by Yuri on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 09:45:38 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Laying down
quietly crying
I'm layig here
slowly dying
I take out my knife
and slit my wrists
I see the blood
and curl my fists
thinks get heavy
things go black
I think of my promise
I made a pact
I guess I broke it
I guess I lied
nobody knows
how I wish I died
my life is ending
I think I'm dying
I got my wish
as I lay here crying

Copyright © Yuri ... [ 2005-06-03 21:45:38]
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Re: Dying (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 09:51:32 PM AEST
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great poem... but sad!!! please don't give up on life. i know you want to... a lot of people do. but we all tough it out. suicide is the easy way out. please don't give into it. best of luck wished for you!!!

~sprints

p.s. good writing! keep up the work.

Re: Dying (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 09:57:12 PM AEST
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Im not one for suicide poetry but sad poem..

Re: Dying (User Rating: 1 )
by Yuri on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 10:01:07 PM AEST
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Thank you again. I'm trying very hard. I know there are some things I have to do first.

Re: Dying (User Rating: 1 )
by ravendominique on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 12:24:31 AM AEST
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I can so relate to this. I can feel the emotion in every word.

Re: Dying (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 10:39:58 PM AEST
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Im a self mutilator as well and I wish I could say something to make you feel better but it would make me a hypocrite. All I can say is that I can feel the pain in this write and I certainly can feel your pain!

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