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I can't go on anymore
All I think about is you
And all that you've done

You told me you loved me
That you cared deeply for me
You just had your way with me
For you own sick amusement

Then you left me there to die
You didn't give me a second thought
How could you be so cold
Don't you have a heart

Just look at what you've done
At what you've put me through
I can't go on anymore
This pain is too much...
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Pain

Contributed by countrychck on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 02:26:31 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

This pain is too much
I can't go on anymore
All I think about is you
And all that you've done

You told me you loved me
That you cared deeply for me
You just had your way with me
For you own sick amusement

Then you left me there to die
You didn't give me a second thought
How could you be so cold
Don't you have a heart

Just look at what you've done
At what you've put me through
I can't go on anymore
This pain is too much...

Copyright © countrychck ... [ 2005-06-03 02:26:31]
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Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 05:11:50 AM AEST
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wow! very strong feelings, guys have a tendency of making us all hurt like that, im sure gurls do to. Its a really hard thing to go thru and i hope yew are working your way thru it. keep writing!! great poem
~~Chrissie~~

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 08:32:50 AM AEST
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Countrychck

After a marriage of ten years I had my love walk on on me. I was truly crushed as I really loved her.
It puts you into a deep dark abyss and I remained there for some years before I could love again.
I feel your pain.

Sinned

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 09:17:26 AM AEST
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i know EXACTLY how you feel. but dont let the pain control you. you've been hurt, used, broken, but dont let it become you. you can always heal. give it time, things will better.
luv n hugs,
jennie* xXx

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 10:02:22 AM AEST
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Great poem.
You express your feelings greatly in this poem.
I used to feel the same.
I couldn't believe what the person had done to me, but eventually I discovered I was better than that person, and I deserved better.
Great write
*~givingin~*

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:43:58 PM AEST
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Suggestion: Don't let a guy get you too far down, no person is worth
losing yourself. You are strong just because you were able to get this
out. I was also recently used by a guy, and it sucked majorly, but
the end of the relationship has made me feel a lot better.

Good job expressing yourself in this poem.

~Kara

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