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Array ( [sid] => 96544 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lies [time] => 2005-06-01 21:17:37 [hometext] => True story, I suppose... not my best work, but comments would be... appreciated. When my mom died my relatives said that nothing would change, that it'd be alright... and now, i dont even talk to them anymore. and nothing in my life is [bodytext] => Lies, deceit
Spoken so easily,
Spoken so calmly

They all lied to me when they
Said that everything was going
To turn out alright in the end
But here I am now
At the edge, waiting for the
End of my story to come
Nearing the last page
And all I see are lies
And all I see are lies
Where is the "alright" that they
Spoke of?
It's not there, I'm surrounded
By darkness
By lies
And all I see are lies
And all I see are lies
As I close my eyes and
Turn the final page
And all I see is blackness [comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 39 [informant] => cocacola1331 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Lies

Contributed by cocacola1331 on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:17:37 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Lies, deceit
Spoken so easily,
Spoken so calmly

They all lied to me when they
Said that everything was going
To turn out alright in the end
But here I am now
At the edge, waiting for the
End of my story to come
Nearing the last page
And all I see are lies
And all I see are lies
Where is the "alright" that they
Spoke of?
It's not there, I'm surrounded
By darkness
By lies
And all I see are lies
And all I see are lies
As I close my eyes and
Turn the final page
And all I see is blackness

Copyright © cocacola1331 ... [ 2005-06-01 21:17:37]
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Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 08:37:51 PM AEST
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beautiful

this is the truth.
nobody speaks truth like this anymore. everyone is full of lies. lies to either make you feel better, or worse, or lies to cover up something they did wrong

great write

- Beth -

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessica_Saini on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 10:40:36 PM AEST
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I like the repetitious use of seeing lies and hearing lies. It really emphasizes the quantity of lies the speaker is hearing, and how overwhelming it is.
Beautiful!
Jessica

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