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Though it is shadowed by my angels tears
See my blood that drips like rain
Though it is mellowed by my angels fears

Watch how sad I become
Though she hurts so much more
Glare at my depression that overcomes
Though you can look into her eyes like open doors

Stare at the reasons we are alike
Though drowned by the death of our souls
See the reason we stand together and fight
For each of our lives alone are cold
. . .
And our love is the only light
At the end of this tunnel we behold

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We Stand Alone

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 07:59:18 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Come in and relish in my pain
Though it is shadowed by my angels tears
See my blood that drips like rain
Though it is mellowed by my angels fears

Watch how sad I become
Though she hurts so much more
Glare at my depression that overcomes
Though you can look into her eyes like open doors

Stare at the reasons we are alike
Though drowned by the death of our souls
See the reason we stand together and fight
For each of our lives alone are cold
. . .
And our love is the only light
At the end of this tunnel we behold

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-06-01 19:59:18]
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Re: We Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:08:12 PM AEST
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i love it clark. this is original. i actually had a nightmare last night that my work was called unoriginal. notice i used the term nightmare. i love the ending and how it rhymed with the rest. this is a good poem, and you know how i know good poetry =]

Re: We Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:32:50 PM AEST
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terrific write start to finish your words play and compliment one another nicely done as always
Michelle

Re: We Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Zeldianus on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:12:11 PM AEST
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amazing. romantic. and poetic. excellent write

Re: We Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 12:31:48 AM AEST
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Nice complimentary style you have going on here...Flows well, good expression.
Scorp.

Re: We Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 02:04:39 AM AEST
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This was fantastic Clarke. You have such a talent in poetry.

I love this it's a well composed poem.

Jane xx

Re: We Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:07:51 PM AEST
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ASTOUNDING clark!!! just so very moving and brilliant just brilliant!
well done, ur terrific

Re: We Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:47:49 AM AEST
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I loved this! great write Clark this is one of my favorites very meaningful and romantic.

--amanda--

Re: We Stand Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Twisterchaser on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 07:29:42 PM AEST
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Great;

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