Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	02-June 19:59:46 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 96304 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Blood On Your Hands [time] => 2005-05-30 20:37:23 [hometext] => a little gory... plz comment [bodytext] => Wrap your fingers around my neck
Suffocate me underneath the covers
Choke me, listen to me struggle

Stab me in the stomach, friend
Not in the back
Sit back and watch me bleed

Peel my fingernails from my skin
Slowly, one by one
Watch me cringe from pain

Sew my eyes open
So that I see you laugh as I die
Let my pain be your enjoyment

Pull out each hair from my head
Scratch away at my dry skin
Gaze at the terror portrayed on my face

Slice open my chest
And gouge out my heart
Leave me without feeling

Slit my throat while I sleep
View my eyes opening in horror
My blood on your hands

Give me my death, friend
Kill me slowly and surely
You stand back and enjoy the show
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 13 [informant] => blue_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

My Blood On Your Hands

Contributed by blue_angel on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Wrap your fingers around my neck
Suffocate me underneath the covers
Choke me, listen to me struggle

Stab me in the stomach, friend
Not in the back
Sit back and watch me bleed

Peel my fingernails from my skin
Slowly, one by one
Watch me cringe from pain

Sew my eyes open
So that I see you laugh as I die
Let my pain be your enjoyment

Pull out each hair from my head
Scratch away at my dry skin
Gaze at the terror portrayed on my face

Slice open my chest
And gouge out my heart
Leave me without feeling

Slit my throat while I sleep
View my eyes opening in horror
My blood on your hands

Give me my death, friend
Kill me slowly and surely
You stand back and enjoy the show

Copyright © blue_angel ... [ 2005-05-30 20:37:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: My Blood On Your Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:46:39 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

absolutely not, jennie!!! i love you too much. what the hell? jennie, look- you got me so worried, i'm showing affection. and we both know something's wrong with that. plz don't talk like that, jennie. unless we can get someone to that to the both of us, so we can die alone together. plz, jennie, don't give up on me. i won't let that happen- you know i won't. talk to me, friend!!!!

Your BEST friend FOREVER,
~sprints

P.S. do NOT leave me, girl!!!

Re: My Blood On Your Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:54:20 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Sprinter's comment sounded like there is something to be worried about. WELL YEAH!!!! I think I have to agree,girl you sound like you might need help, it is pretty icky sounding, and yet it would make an excellent horror clip in a MOVIE, but a poem, not to sure about, hope you get help.
Tammi

Re: My Blood On Your Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:04:19 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Ick! This was one of the most disturbing poems I've ever read. I don't mean to be insulting, Jennie, because from a literary sense it conveys imagery, but I honestly don't like the message. Sprints is so right. I'm not sure what's going on, but it hurts to read this (as I am sure it hurts you to write it). You mean a lot to so many people who care for you. You can't deny that. You are... hell, what am I going to say that I haven't said before. I (and a whole lot of others) would miss you. So much. You've touched a lot of ppl's lives.

Be well my friend!

Re: My Blood On Your Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:13:38 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

You definitely got the gory, and the shock value with that hun, that's
dark and scary... I hope you're doing alright; I can kind of relate and
have thought similar things in my mind before.

~Kara

Re: My Blood On Your Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:51:02 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

it seems that the one doing the killing isn't necessarily a person...ironically, it could be life itself, taking itself away from us every day...piece by piece. i don't find this as disturbing as some of the others who have commented...

wizard

Re: My Blood On Your Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:58:01 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

disturbing indeed..
but with incredible imagery..

with friends like that, who needs enemies..
or murderers for that matter

deliciously haunting though-

B

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com