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Array ( [sid] => 96195 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Creators of Life -- with a name so short [time] => 2005-05-29 19:52:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You have the ability to make a human being, with only the use of your own body.
Breathing and blinking, the beginning to your very own creation, and the start to a new generation.

What a great feeling that must be, to hold the power to breath life into the one thing that must be maintained.
For if it is not there would be no such ring, no cycle, no meaning!!!...
Making the job a superior position to be retained!

This thing that now breaths & does now so blink, also now carries along where it travels, your name with it so plain.
Such in all creation, walks with feet & 10 toes that came from a part so undeniably yours & forever that will always remain.

Now a name is given to that you've just made, as now in turn you have excepted a label to be called in trade.

So you must frolic & leap from all the joy this possession of power to you it must bring.
Every being is not so tenderly blessed to do such a thing.

Well...

You made us, does that make you feel special??, Maybe great??,, do you feel anything at all??...

Think back to the day we were born...
do you now feel differently that we made you feel then??, or can you recall??

Something this huge & such a huge part of you, you'd think you'd feel very strongly & be much attached!
Or do you feel to be rid of this...
thing would be an overdue itch, finally scratched?

We call it by a name, given due its fragility & size,
like a piece of fine glass,
age doesn't make it less easy to break, even with multiple tries! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 43 [informant] => kareless [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Creators of Life -- with a name so short

Contributed by kareless on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:52:39 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



You have the ability to make a human being, with only the use of your own body.
Breathing and blinking, the beginning to your very own creation, and the start to a new generation.

What a great feeling that must be, to hold the power to breath life into the one thing that must be maintained.
For if it is not there would be no such ring, no cycle, no meaning!!!...
Making the job a superior position to be retained!

This thing that now breaths & does now so blink, also now carries along where it travels, your name with it so plain.
Such in all creation, walks with feet & 10 toes that came from a part so undeniably yours & forever that will always remain.

Now a name is given to that you've just made, as now in turn you have excepted a label to be called in trade.

So you must frolic & leap from all the joy this possession of power to you it must bring.
Every being is not so tenderly blessed to do such a thing.

Well...

You made us, does that make you feel special??, Maybe great??,, do you feel anything at all??...

Think back to the day we were born...
do you now feel differently that we made you feel then??, or can you recall??

Something this huge & such a huge part of you, you'd think you'd feel very strongly & be much attached!
Or do you feel to be rid of this...
thing would be an overdue itch, finally scratched?

We call it by a name, given due its fragility & size,
like a piece of fine glass,
age doesn't make it less easy to break, even with multiple tries!




Copyright © kareless ... [ 2005-05-29 19:52:39]
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Re: Creators of Life -- with a name so short (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:26:32 PM AEST
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Maybe it is just an anacronym and no one remembers what it stands for. Maybe, ermmm, Grand Old Dad or Great Old Diety, hmmm, this is interesting. I have to go think up some more ta ta

Rita




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