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Array ( [sid] => 95920 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blessed [time] => 2005-05-27 00:42:26 [hometext] => my best imagery and personification so far [bodytext] => The rolling gait of the hills as they march to their end
Kissed by the suns not so gentle rays
Clouds scurry aimlessly up above
We all think that we're safe cause we think that we're loved

Chorus:
When they told us they lied
So baddly disguised
We can't be alone in this place
So they spat in our face
Gods a lie
We still look to the skies.

Skies dark with sodden earth
Swollen seas rise and beckon the blaze of the storm
Fat droplets pound on the roof as we hide from it all
We don't answer the call

all is total... all is nothing.. blessed [comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 34 [informant] => jimmato [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Blessed

Contributed by jimmato on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:42:26 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

The rolling gait of the hills as they march to their end
Kissed by the suns not so gentle rays
Clouds scurry aimlessly up above
We all think that we're safe cause we think that we're loved

Chorus:
When they told us they lied
So baddly disguised
We can't be alone in this place
So they spat in our face
Gods a lie
We still look to the skies.

Skies dark with sodden earth
Swollen seas rise and beckon the blaze of the storm
Fat droplets pound on the roof as we hide from it all
We don't answer the call

all is total... all is nothing.. blessed

Copyright © jimmato ... [ 2005-05-27 00:42:26]
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Re: Blessed (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:21:21 AM AEST
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Nice song you have happening here...I especially like the chorus. That's where I can really feel your emotion.
Scorp.

Re: Blessed (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:56:32 AM AEST
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I like the words ... but I have trouble settling into a rhythm ... I would love to hear this as you do.

Nazzy ~

Re: Blessed (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:33:46 PM AEST
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A very nice song that has it's own style and uniqueness, a great peice of poetry fused
with musical prowess, nice writting . . .

Dorian Chambers

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