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Array ( [sid] => 95843 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forecast [time] => 2005-05-26 14:13:17 [hometext] => Lured back to the darkside yet again....lol *sigh* [bodytext] => Stormy weather prevails
sifting through emotional hail

Firing thunderbolts of anger
spiritual calm cast on a hanger

Clouds of tears raining down
reactions no longer mentally sound

Seeds of life left frostbitten
foggy recollections of someone smitten

Optimistic sun striving to show its face
tornados of doubt refuse airspace

Windy conditions threaten hope
dusk and dawn duel on a tightrope

A blizzard of unknowns stir confusion
ice greets a heart and starts its infusion

Physical union split by sleet
crumpled flowers that warmth will never greet

Skepticism as abundant as snow
perhaps just a sunshower that will eventually blow....
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 13 [informant] => hauntedscorp [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 40 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Forecast

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 02:13:17 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Stormy weather prevails
sifting through emotional hail

Firing thunderbolts of anger
spiritual calm cast on a hanger

Clouds of tears raining down
reactions no longer mentally sound

Seeds of life left frostbitten
foggy recollections of someone smitten

Optimistic sun striving to show its face
tornados of doubt refuse airspace

Windy conditions threaten hope
dusk and dawn duel on a tightrope

A blizzard of unknowns stir confusion
ice greets a heart and starts its infusion

Physical union split by sleet
crumpled flowers that warmth will never greet

Skepticism as abundant as snow
perhaps just a sunshower that will eventually blow....

Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2005-05-26 14:13:17]
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Re: Forecast (User Rating: 1 )
by heartquake on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 04:17:09 PM AEST
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good write... my kinda poem... SSSP: short, sweet, simple, and powerful.... and i'm a sucker of subliminal messages and metaphores and such.... great write... take care

Re: Forecast (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:02:00 PM AEST
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Scorp you've did it again. You've produced a strong, vivid and extraordinary write. You do it with such ease. I love the way u captivate ur reader. Luring them to read ur work from start to finish. Well done girl, keep 'em coming.
*hugs* from ur fan/friend,
~sue~

Re: Forecast (User Rating: 1 )
by Jimmato on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:59:37 AM AEST
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More people should read this one and vote for it.

Re: Forecast (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:39:32 PM AEST
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So good scorp. I love it for the stresses between light and dark that it shows. J.

Re: Forecast (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:05:07 PM AEST
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i loved this scorp. it was very original and put together. im still blown away. i hope you liked the pun =]

Re: Forecast (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 02:55:42 AM AEST
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scorp, this is the absolute best forecast I have ever seen. Your work is awesome and as I have probably said before, sometimes words are not enough to explain how much I enjoy reading your stuff. My words are merely words Yours are creativity surpassing the threshold of excellence.

Re: Forecast (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 05:14:25 PM AEST
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Very well done
I see in big diff.
in your writing from this
to your writes now
This is awsome
writing

Re: Forecast (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 19th September 2020 @ 02:58:28 PM AEST
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Not really sad but not happy either.
Even though dark it had a joyous flow-weird.
Love the structure and jive.........
I used to space my poems and sort of gave up I guess.
But this is easy to read and keeps the flow. Loved it.

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