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Array ( [sid] => 95669 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Oh Brother! [time] => 2005-05-25 00:00:46 [hometext] => This is for my Brother, he is still alive, but I know not where he is! [bodytext] => Oh brother, why did you disappear that night?
Never a good-bye, never a reason for going.
Just left, disappeared , I guess to start a new life.

I don’t understand why you left, we loved you,
You where welcomed in all our lives,
There was no reason to run away, honestly, and true.

Where are you now? Are you far or near?
I know you don’t want us to find you,
How do this I know? For it is plainly clear.

Dear Brother, you are always on our hearts.
Never will I forget you, or stop loving you,
Oh Brother, come out of hiding, and in this family, take once again a part.
Tammi Pitman
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Oh Brother!

Contributed by poet70 on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:00:46 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Oh brother, why did you disappear that night?
Never a good-bye, never a reason for going.
Just left, disappeared , I guess to start a new life.

I don’t understand why you left, we loved you,
You where welcomed in all our lives,
There was no reason to run away, honestly, and true.

Where are you now? Are you far or near?
I know you don’t want us to find you,
How do this I know? For it is plainly clear.

Dear Brother, you are always on our hearts.
Never will I forget you, or stop loving you,
Oh Brother, come out of hiding, and in this family, take once again a part.
Tammi Pitman

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Re: Oh Brother! (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:15:33 AM AEST
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Tammi this is such a sad and heartfelt write. I hope ur brother hears ur pleas and comes back safely to his warm loving family who loves and misses him so much. May God hear ur prayers and bring him back home safely.
*hugs*
~sue~

Re: Oh Brother! (User Rating: 1 )
by Hippie on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 06:59:30 AM AEST
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I agree it is a fantasic write, i really feel for you..... i know what it is like to loose a brother, but i have never been able to write about it. wee done, straight from the heart.

Take Care,

Hippie
xx

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