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pain is being _____
Contributed by
thegurl
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Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 06:03:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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standing in the mist of the morning being blinded by the stark white she couldn't say why she took of running maybe compelled to be alone in the forest the one place she ever really felt whole-- only today she felt oddly unhuman because she was unable to speak she knew what to say to him but couldn't much like animals that were all around her that seemed afraid to come closer maybe today they could feel her apprehension they knew she was shivering to fight it off still they understand her anger and left-- somehow she had managed to lose heart damning herself for letting it happen why would anyone betray her with someone else most of all betray her with her best friend cause the foreign emotion she felt something that almost seemed like pain she needed him most now but refused to go back instead she decided to run fast as she could hopefully to someone who would soothe her pain.
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Re: pain is being _____
(User Rating: 1 ) by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 07:23:28 PM AEST (User
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i LIKE this, great word use
all in all, a very powerful poem indeed of betrayal and pain......heart-wrenching emotions to deal with |
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