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Array ( [sid] => 95206 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm done with you [time] => 2005-05-21 01:39:24 [hometext] => PLEASE RATE THIS POEM [bodytext] => You hurt me really bad
How stupid was I to believe
That when you said you loved me
You were being completely honest

I should have known you lied
All the excuses to why we couldn't be
Kept coming and coming
Til soon they started to repeat themselves

How could you do me like this
Treat me like I have not feelings
Why couldn't you just be honest
Instead of leading me on

But this is it, I'm done with you
You're not worth my time
There's some one out there looking for me
And you honey, you just lost me.... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 294 [topic] => 2 [informant] => countrychck [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I'm done with you

Contributed by countrychck on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 01:39:24 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You hurt me really bad
How stupid was I to believe
That when you said you loved me
You were being completely honest

I should have known you lied
All the excuses to why we couldn't be
Kept coming and coming
Til soon they started to repeat themselves

How could you do me like this
Treat me like I have not feelings
Why couldn't you just be honest
Instead of leading me on

But this is it, I'm done with you
You're not worth my time
There's some one out there looking for me
And you honey, you just lost me....

Copyright © countrychck ... [ 2005-05-21 01:39:24]
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Re: I'm done with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Chey on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 02:36:54 AM AEST
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Sad but well written. Better luck next time i hope. Chey

Re: I'm done with you (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 04:37:49 AM AEST
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It is a good write..you have realized the truth.
venkat

Re: I'm done with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 04:58:45 AM AEST
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I feel like this, someone lead me on as well, claimed to love me, said all the right things then would give me reasons why we couldn't on.... then it would be heartache at spliting up elation at getting back together, like a fool every time I fell for the same thing.

Wow I guess what I'm saying is you've tapped into my feelings and basically caputured the essence onf my latest poem. very good write...

Sonya

Re: I'm done with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:28:39 AM AEST
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Countrychck

Sad so many can relate to your poem. I also.
Your hurt and anger jumped out.
But Huray for you
Nolonger being used
You express yourself very well
Keep writing

Sinned

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