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Array ( [sid] => 95084 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Never ask me to go [time] => 2005-05-20 01:00:24 [hometext] => Some love touchs our hearts while others are buried so deep we can never let it go. [bodytext] => The words you said to me
Rip at my heart.
To go find another
To make a fresh start

You say that just now
Be can’t be together
That your life is too much
Like stormy weather

My love for you
Runs oh so deep
You may as well say
Off a bridge I must leap

To go find another to love
That we must part
But what good would I do them
When you hold my heart

Listen to the words that I speak
I made a promise to not only you but me
To see that happiness is always
In the cards for thee

So if a lifetime of friendship
Is all that we see
Then I will strive
And the best friend I will be

Please all I ask from thee
This I think you know
Please baby I beg of you
Never ask me to go
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Never ask me to go

Contributed by somedaylove on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 01:00:24 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The words you said to me
Rip at my heart.
To go find another
To make a fresh start

You say that just now
Be can’t be together
That your life is too much
Like stormy weather

My love for you
Runs oh so deep
You may as well say
Off a bridge I must leap

To go find another to love
That we must part
But what good would I do them
When you hold my heart

Listen to the words that I speak
I made a promise to not only you but me
To see that happiness is always
In the cards for thee

So if a lifetime of friendship
Is all that we see
Then I will strive
And the best friend I will be

Please all I ask from thee
This I think you know
Please baby I beg of you
Never ask me to go

Copyright Â© somedaylove ... [ 2005-05-20 01:00:24]
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Re: Never ask me to go (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 01:09:16 AM AEST
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Wow, I really don't know what I would do if my love told me to leave...This poem is good too, Very heartfelt and sad, but with a small light of hope at the end....Good luck to you with everything

~Clark

Re: Never ask me to go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 02:21:28 AM AEST
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Wow! Another great write from one of the great poets at yourpoetry.com. I feel privileged to be here. " But what good would I do them
When you hold my heart" I have these same feelings about someone and to me it is so hard to deal with them because some people just don't understand them. Sometimes I do wish, like it seems some people think we can just do, to have an "emotion" chip we could just unplug like good ol' Data of STNG. Would make like simpler now wouldn't it.
Thanks for writing here. I loved reading this.

Re: Never ask me to go (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 08:43:21 AM AEST
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Very beutiful.... I related to this a lot.

I like the way you tap into your emotions and sum up those of some many in the process.

Sonya

Re: Never ask me to go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 12:10:04 PM AEST
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I know exactly what you are going through, I myself am going through something simlar. It sums up how I feel. Hope that everything works out and that one day soon yall can be together again. I'm glad that you wrote this and that somebody out feels the same as me. Thank you for sharing. Wonderful job on expressing how you feel.

Re: Never ask me to go (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 07:37:18 PM AEST
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Now that is a declaration of real love. To accept just being a friend to be able to stay around them. That is quite a love. This is quite a poem.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: Never ask me to go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:42:53 AM AEST
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I can really relate to this. I enjoyed this piece immensely. It's so sincere and lovely. Excellent work.

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