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A Broken Dream
Contributed by
lonelystar1180
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:05:12 PM in AEST
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A dream broken it
can feel like your world
has ended and you think
that here is nothing to live for.
A dream broken also
feels like someone hit
you so hard that you
cry coz of the pain
that hurts you.
A dream broken can
Also feel like a nightmare
That you cannot wake up
And you want to wake
Up but you cant.
This is what I feel
Sometime in my life
And I can truly say
That my dream is broken
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lonelystar1180
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2005-05-19 14:05:12]
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Re: A Broken Dream
(User Rating: 1 )
by ruthy on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:10:32 PM AEST
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ronnie,its magnificent,you have a wonderful talent, im with you now, i know your heart is breaking, but im here! i know you can be strong...keep the dream going, dont ever stop writing,
~ruthy~ xXx |
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