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Array ( [sid] => 94936 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To Dream Until Eternity [time] => 2005-05-18 21:09:21 [hometext] => I was tryingto do something around Poe's poem [Alone], but as u see, it didn't work. I tried to write using his style so I could better understand his work. Hey, I had to do something in math class... Don't expect much, I'm 14. [bodytext] => No longer do I love [alone]
for now I've given my heart loan.
The largest demons have left me be--
Oh! if only for eternity!
The dream of me that I live
is of people who will forgive
and hope and peace that blow through meadows--
(While I myself dwell in shadows)--
too soon expire
so I am destroyed in reality's fire.
But only when my sleep disrupts
by missing things my mind corrupts
will this damning torture
be my looming future.
Till then, think not of the folly that be--
think only of a sleepy melody. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 43 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

To Dream Until Eternity

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:09:21 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

No longer do I love [alone]
for now I've given my heart loan.
The largest demons have left me be--
Oh! if only for eternity!
The dream of me that I live
is of people who will forgive
and hope and peace that blow through meadows--
(While I myself dwell in shadows)--
too soon expire
so I am destroyed in reality's fire.
But only when my sleep disrupts
by missing things my mind corrupts
will this damning torture
be my looming future.
Till then, think not of the folly that be--
think only of a sleepy melody.

Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2005-05-18 21:09:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: To Dream Until Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 12:56:59 PM AEST
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A young age , I think , does not take away from this poem. You have given yourself to little credit but I will give to you what you have denied yourself. This is a great poem for any age. Rarely do I bother to read one twice yet I did on this one. truly , doug

Re: To Dream Until Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by Fears on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:28:38 PM AEST
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very well written, ( cummon, you gotta give us younger one some credit, we work our asses off in math class-too bad we aint doin it )

I liked your poem and i think that you did i good job. It flowed. Keep writing in math class because it seems to b working 4 u!

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