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Array ( [sid] => 94834 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Remember... [time] => 2005-05-18 01:39:58 [hometext] => Another sad poetry.. Please comment... [bodytext] => When you kiss me that night
under the lonely moonlight
I remember my teary eyes
while our hearts are saying goodbye

I remember the lonesome river
where we share our romantic years
I can't forget its cold water
as cold as the end of our affair

I remember the comely flower
that you give as a first gift
The smell that touch my loving heart
The thorns that bleed my aching heart

I remember the sweet promises
that we made under the lonely moonlight
making me wait in the lonesome river
to receive in the end a pain of heart [comments] => 6 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 22 [informant] => mannyrich [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Remember...

Contributed by mannyrich on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:39:58 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

When you kiss me that night
under the lonely moonlight
I remember my teary eyes
while our hearts are saying goodbye

I remember the lonesome river
where we share our romantic years
I can't forget its cold water
as cold as the end of our affair

I remember the comely flower
that you give as a first gift
The smell that touch my loving heart
The thorns that bleed my aching heart

I remember the sweet promises
that we made under the lonely moonlight
making me wait in the lonesome river
to receive in the end a pain of heart

Copyright Â© mannyrich ... [ 2005-05-18 01:39:58]
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Re: I Remember... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:46:09 AM AEST
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A bit sad but awesomely written.
huggs,
emy

Re: I Remember... (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:27:15 AM AEST
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touching, and sadly beautifal, i love the last stanza the most

SM

Re: I Remember... (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 06:44:18 AM AEST
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so sad! :( but a good poem! :)

Re: I Remember... (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 10:29:52 AM AEST
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A good write but it was sad but at the same time I did enjoy it. You did a great job at showing your emotions and drawing the reader in. Take care and keep your head up….Steve

Re: I Remember... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:00:33 AM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written..
Jenni

Re: I Remember... (User Rating: 1 )
by Karazoul on Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:35:38 PM AEST
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Oh wow!!! This is so touching.....excellent write....

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